Huh. Bittersweet, but cool. I always feel like crying when Roxas kills Axel. Everyone was pretty in character, even Rei. And you didn't go overboard with the shippy Rei/Roxas feels, which made it feel like a sad parting between best friends. And then of course, the Riku-prying-Rei away scene was sad. You also gave a slight insight to Riku's half in the beginning with that last scene. All in all, this seems really cool, and it'll be even better when the pages come out.
I like it! The Rei and Roxas moments is bittersweet. I can't wait to see it turned into a comic. And I look forward to seeing the fight scenes.
Ohgosh I forgot Riku is in Ansem's body so I was confused a bit XD
OOOOOOOH~ that sounds awesome! I can't wait to see that script get turned into some comic pages... well, yeah, I can wait, since it's going to be SO AWESOME that it will totally be worth the wait.
Kazamas-Keyblade
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/29/14 | Reply
This would make for an awesome Comic.
allycat2090
Senior Otaku | Posted 12/29/14 | Reply
Huh. Bittersweet, but cool. I always feel like crying when Roxas kills Axel. Everyone was pretty in character, even Rei. And you didn't go overboard with the shippy Rei/Roxas feels, which made it feel like a sad parting between best friends. And then of course, the Riku-prying-Rei away scene was sad. You also gave a slight insight to Riku's half in the beginning with that last scene. All in all, this seems really cool, and it'll be even better when the pages come out.
Artgrrl
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/28/14 | Reply
I like it! The Rei and Roxas moments is bittersweet. I can't wait to see it turned into a comic. And I look forward to seeing the fight scenes.
Ohgosh I forgot Riku is in Ansem's body so I was confused a bit XD
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/28/14 | Reply
OOOOOOOH~ that sounds awesome! I can't wait to see that script get turned into some comic pages... well, yeah, I can wait, since it's going to be SO AWESOME that it will totally be worth the wait.