I do! I love the idea of it — especially since the love you describe is one of something akin to respect. I love the language you use in it, too. It creates a softness and, at the same time, yearning for something more. I wish I knew how to describe it better, but just know that you've done a really good job here. The idea behind it is so simple, yet you weave the characters, settings, and important plot points (can't think of a better word) in a way that makes it beautifully complex. I like how you've added the otherworldly elements in: they are present but not overbearing. Keba and Jon are both very likable characters and I'd love to read more of their adventures if you eventually continue this story.
I can't believe how much you like this one. I thought it was a little corny.
I have another chapter written out. It begins a new arc. The problem is that I don't have any chapters AFTER it. But I know where the story is going. If you could poke me every once in a while about writing more, that would be great.
Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
envythejealous
It's "hello," sir. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/30/16 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
I do! I love the idea of it — especially since the love you describe is one of something akin to respect. I love the language you use in it, too. It creates a softness and, at the same time, yearning for something more. I wish I knew how to describe it better, but just know that you've done a really good job here. The idea behind it is so simple, yet you weave the characters, settings, and important plot points (can't think of a better word) in a way that makes it beautifully complex. I like how you've added the otherworldly elements in: they are present but not overbearing. Keba and Jon are both very likable characters and I'd love to read more of their adventures if you eventually continue this story.
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/30/16 | Reply
@envythejealous:
You really think so?
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envythejealous
It's "hello," sir. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/29/16 | Reply
This is such a beautiful story!
Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/26/14 | Reply
@:
Thank you.
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Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/26/14 | Reply
@:
Aw, thank you!
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elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/19/13 | Reply
@Keba Si Rota:
No, no, no, not at all!
Well, there are some bits where I'm like, "That wasn't what I expected," but it's still far from corny.Story of my life.
Definitely!Keba Si Rota
Don't Forget 3 Oct (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/19/13 | Reply
@elricbrothersfan:
I can't believe how much you like this one. I thought it was a little corny.
I have another chapter written out. It begins a new arc. The problem is that I don't have any chapters AFTER it. But I know where the story is going.
If you could poke me every once in a while about writing more, that would be great.Call it karma. Call it luck. Me, I just don't give a... BOUNCE!
elricbrothersfan
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/19/13 | Reply
Not the guitar... NEKURA!!!!
'You're a human' PFFT Okay then, keep on running! Don't let the handsome stranger with magical powers protect you!
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D'awwwwwwwww... grumble grumble grumble grumble...
*whispers* necklaceeeeee...
D'AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! ASLKFDKJLKSDNLKSDFLKDSJNFSDF
*chants* Please write more! Please write more! Please write more! Please write more!