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Thawing Ice... Part 1

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All I could remeber was pain, the pain, as I fell to the ground, dead. And from my body, my soul was ripped away, creating me into a monster, known only as a hollow. Then, in the midst of my confusion, I saw a face in the darkness. I heard a voice, calling me to join him. "Come, join us..." he beconed me. I wanted to be free, so I followed the voice. Everything then went dark, and when I awoke, I felt human. I had a strangely powerful feeling.
Gathering my strength, I sat up. There was a mirror on the wall adjecent to the table I woke up on. There was a slight draft in the large empty halls as I got up and walked to the mirror. I looked jus as I had before, whitish-blonde hair that I had had before. Then I noticed something, I was completely devoid of clothing except for the remnants of my hoolow mask, which covered the left side of my chest. Blushing, I covered myself with my hands and looked around for clothing. "Welcome," a voice called out to me.
"Aah!" I shrieked, running for cover behind a curtain.
The man laughed. "It's okay, you can come out, I've brought clothes for you. They were specially made just for you."
I gave him a cautious look, "Bring them here."
He did as I asked, and I snatched the outfit away from him. The shirt was specially made so that I could still wear my mask. It had a raised collar that didn't reach all the way around. Then, he handed me a Zanpaku-To, "Take this,you can give it a name as well,"
I came out from behind the curtain, brandishing my new sword. "Aullido Sangriento"(Bloody Howl)
"I am Aizen,"the man said, introducing himself,"And now your master, you will find your number tattooed on the left side of your hip.Welcome, number 10"
Instead of protesting, I just ignored him, and walked away, tucking my Zanpaku-To on a loop on my pants meant for it. I walked through several corridors, and then found a large one with several others like me. "Hey, it's the new kid!" Luppi said arrogantly, walking over.
"New kid? For what?! What's going on here?!" I questioned angrily.
"Temper,temper, must you be so aggressive?" he replied.
"I can do whatever I just so wish." I growled, pulling out Aullido Sangriento.
"Put that away, I was kidding."
"I'm not." I sneered.
Luppi shook his head,"Do you know anything about what's going on?"
"No, so you better start telling me."
He sighed,"You were a hollow, right? Well, you've become an Arrancar. What's your number?"
"10" I replied with caution.
"What type of Hollow were you?"
"Menos Grande."
"You're an Espada then."
I looked around, and saw a man all by himself, leaning against a wall. He had facial markings similar to mine, only his were green. His eyes were closed, as if concentrating on something. Ignoring Luppi, I walked over to this man, curious about him. "Hi,"
His eyes opened, but he was quiet. I looked at him intently, waiting for a reply. "You look familiar, do I know you?" I nearly whispered.
"Do I look like I care about garbage like you?" he scoffed in annoyance.
I glared at him. "Why yes, you do." I retorted.
He sighed, "What do you want?"
"To talk to you, whether you like it or not. There's something you're not telling me."
"No, I don't know you."
I racked my brain trying to think of where I might've seen him. Then it hit me. "Ulquiorra?"
The look on his face was the same, muted, emotionless expression, but I could see shock in his eyes. "How do you know my name?" He asked slowly.
"It doesn't matter, now does it? After all, you're not one to care about garbage like me." I replied sarcastically.
He looked at a loss for words, I had beaten him at his own game. I started back towards Luppi when he grabbed my arm, and dragged me into an empty hallway. "I want to know how you know so much." he said angrily.
"I knew you when we were alive, but even then, I had no meaning to you. Even though I died because of your stupid ego."
He gave me a quizzical look for a moment, and then looked away, as if in deep thought. Then, his gaze returned to me, and he looked me straight in the eyes. "Clover?!"
"None other." I replied with the same sarcasm as before.
He looked ashamed for a moment and then emotionless. All went silent for what seemed like forever...

To be continued later.