My first storyline

I recently found a storyline I was working on when I was depressed.
It was my first one, and I didn't think much of it at first.
Having read over it, it turns out to be really romantic and (I think) pretty decent ^^
Of course, since I was sad, it goes to say it's also rather tragic.
If anyone would like to read it, I can post it.
I was very bored and decided to try to draw the main character, Arren.
The body I drew surprised me a lot, I think it's pretty good!
The face is almost complete, however I don't know what to do for the hair :/
If anyone wants to read the story, look at what I've drawn or have comments/suggestions please let me know