This is a fabulous fanfiction. The emotion is very well described; it had me in her head. Haru and Rin's love is very powerful, and I felt it from both sides here. The snapshot at the end makes me calm and hopeful. Great job!
OMG!!! That was so awesome! The only thing is I haven't even gotten to read the rest of the original Fruits Basket series so at first I was kinda lost.
"There are some possessions that must never be sold for all the fortunes of the world."
I'm glad you guys liked it!!! I'm trying to get it posted officially, too...it's going through the system now. I love Yuki and Yellow, too And Sumire-chan, there is nothing wrong with three dots!! I use them all the time
Last edited by cherrichan13 at 4:26:26 PM EST on February 14, 2009.
Aww that was really sweet and sad. Rin and Haru are my favorite couple, next to Yuki and Yellow (just in case someone hasn't read the manga, I will use her code name).
cherrichan13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/22/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
Thanks, Karmira! I'm so glad you like it, your opinion means a lot to me
SinsofMidnight
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/22/09 | Reply
I felt all the pain, affection, epmtyness and love as if it were my own. Great job!
Karmira
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 03/22/09 | Reply
This is a fabulous fanfiction. The emotion is very well described; it had me in her head. Haru and Rin's love is very powerful, and I felt it from both sides here. The snapshot at the end makes me calm and hopeful. Great job!
cherrichan13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 03/10/09 | Reply
@isuzu san:
They should be
isuzu san
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/03/09 | Reply
Aww In my world rin and Haru are still together
Miaka Kusanagi
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 02/19/09 | Reply
OMG!!! That was so awesome! The only thing is I haven't even gotten to read the rest of the original Fruits Basket series so at first I was kinda lost.
"There are some possessions that must never be sold for all the fortunes of the world."kasumi83760
Title: Otakuite | Posted 02/15/09 | Reply
That was so romantic
i love dark the most
cherrichan13
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 02/10/09 | Reply
I'm glad you guys liked it!!! I'm trying to get it posted officially, too...it's going through the system now. I love Yuki and Yellow, too
And Sumire-chan, there is nothing wrong with three dots!! I use them all the time
Last edited by cherrichan13 at 4:26:26 PM EST on February 14, 2009.
sumirechan
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 02/09/09 | Reply
wow...that was...sweet...and...really sad...I have to stop using the three dots?
burnedrose
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 02/09/09 | Reply
Aww that was really sweet and sad. Rin and Haru are my favorite couple, next to Yuki and Yellow (just in case someone hasn't read the manga, I will use her code name).