Indeed nice piece of writing ^_^ You've taken in account the characters really well. Vocab and behaviour... it all suits!
Maybe you should add a pun for Goku, that would be really nice (haven't read the next few pages yet, so don't kill me if you've already added one, hehe).
mimilove4
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/06/09 | Reply
@Nehszriah:
No, haha, of course I don't mind! ^_^
Nehszriah
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
@mimilove4:
Your comments make me smile. Yay! :3
Mind if I PM you about something to do with the kids?
Be true, be you and of couse, be otaku.mimilove4
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
Things are getting interesting, hehe... Faved it, so keep on writing ;P
mimilove4
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/05/09 | Reply
Lol, poor Gokudera...
Indeed nice piece of writing ^_^ You've taken in account the characters really well. Vocab and behaviour... it all suits!
Maybe you should add a pun for Goku, that would be really nice (haven't read the next few pages yet, so don't kill me if you've already added one, hehe).
Nehszriah
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 02/04/09 | Reply
@jannycats:
Thank you! ^__^ It was so hard to get people to review on fanfiction.net that I almost did not finish. =_=' I'm glad you liked it though.
Be true, be you and of couse, be otaku.jannycats
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/04/09 | Reply
Nice piece of writing, it really captures Gokudera's character ^_^