My First Naruto Fan Fic. Chapter 1

“I don’t understand why you put up with that brat, Lord Orochimaru.” Kabuto said pushing his glasses up his nose, “She is too kind for the Sound village and will not kill the simplest animal when we are training.”

“I have not told you why I keep her have I? Well it’s simple, I need her in order to read a scroll I stole.”

“So you’re using her?”

“Yes... Let me tell you the whole story. After I left the Akatsuki I heard about a jutsu that will prolong how long I can remain in a body. I had to get a hold of this jutsu, so I destroyed the brat’s village to get it. After I killed everyone I figured out I needed a villager to read it! Lucky for me I head that brat crying over her parent’s bodies. She was just what I needed to access the jutsu! I asked her to come with me so I could take care of her. She was frightened, which is natural. I told her that I would train her and find the person who killed everyone. The fool believed that I would kill who ever killed her family and happily accepted my invitation. So, I trained her and took care of her waiting until I’m sure she fully trust me.” Orochimaru said.

He stood up from his chair and walked across the candle lit room. He opened a black chest and pulled out a large red scroll with the word, “Forbidden” on it.

“When the time is right Ayame Hattori will read the scroll to me and when I no longer need her....”

He picked up a kanai that was laying on the table and threw it at the picture of Ayame that was hanging on the wall. The kanai hit the picture of her right in the middle of her forehead.

That night around the dinner table Ayame was picking at her meal. Sasuke had joined them that night.
“Is something bothering you Ayame?” Kabuto asked her.
“It’s nothing. I’m just thinking......”
“Well don’t think too hard, Ayame.” Orochimaru said.
“I wont Orochimaru-sama.”
“So, Sasuke what did you do today?” Orochimaru asked.
“I was bored and since you were to busy to help me train I taught Ayame Chidori. For her first day at it she’s really good. If she practices with me a few more time then she will be better at it than me.”
“I’m nowhere as good as you Sasuke-kun.”
“Don’t be so modest. I thought it was great how you taught me a bit of medical jutsu.”
“Only how to help heal wounds faster....”
“A good thing to know.” Kabuto stated.
“I’m sorry I was busy today. How about after dinner you and I get some training in, Sasuke?”
“Ok.”
“Orochimaru-sama? May I be excused? I’m not feeling well....” Ayame said, “I may have over id it today in training...”
“Fine.”
Ayame picked up her dished and left the room. After cleaning her dishes off she went to her room to think. She rolled out her mat and crawled under the covers staring at the ceiling thinking. A few minutes later Kabuto walked in. She sat up instantly.
“Lord Orochimaru wants you to make miso soup tomorrow night for dinner.” Kabuto said, “You said you weren’t feeling well. Want me to have a look?”
“Thanks Kabuto...But I think I just need to sleep.”
“Ok....Feel better. Call me if you change your mind or need any medicine.”
“Alright I will. Thanks...”
Kabuto nodded and left the room shutting the door behind him.

Tell me what you think. I'm all for constructive crit.
~Chero~

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