This story was told from TenTen's point of view and it was very inspiring. Seeing TenTen's curiousity in Sakura and Sasuke.
Then there is Neji who just has to come in and tell her what everyone wants to happened even though all that has happened between the two of them. They are actually hugging!!
I've read mostly all your stories and what else is there to say they are all very inspiring and imagitive!!!!!!!!!!
wow, like the others have, said, there aren't many Tenten stuff out there. And thanks to Someguy (lol nice name) for giving this person their inspiration back!! XoXo, hope to see you soon, QB1
Wow...awesome. You keep on writing Sasuke-Sakura, that's my favourite anime pairing neways.
I like the way your stories are set out so it's not really abovious what's happening till the end, which really draws you in, err, if you know what I mean.
Good job! ^^ Keep on using those awesome writing skills, kay? XD
Damn, you're a crazy fast typer. I am in awe. *bows*
It's an addiction. Sort if like chocolate. Sometimes when I think Kohaku-Dono's The Danger of Fanfictions, I feel like she was talking directly to me...
Thank you so much! I love comments like yours, long and thought out. I really should broaden my horizens, but it seems everytime I think of a new plot for a different pairing, I say to myself, "Hey, this would work with SasuSaku.."
And as you can tell, I get a little carried away.
I'll take your thoughts into consideration, I think I have a new story in the works...
I think first off I have to say that I'm very honoured to have this dedicated to me. Thank you for that!
So this newest story of yours . . .
It goes without saying that a lot of your stories are very similar, since they're all more or less written about the same themes and characters. That in itself doesn't bother me since no one would care if an artist drew a big set of SakuSasu artwork or anything, right? Actually, a lot of times the feeling I get is that your stories are all taken from one big main story, but just telling slightly different pieces of it or telling them from different perspectives.
All that said, it was really refreshing to have this one told from Tenten's point of view. It made the narration different in that it both gave the narrator an invested interest in the events taking place as well as allowing for a way to not have all the answers laid out in obvious sight.
Only main thing that would keep people from enjoying this would be if they don't have a large interest in Sakura-Sasuke romance story (or in this case, in Tenten watching a Sakura-Sasuke romance story). Other than that, you write some excellent stories. Very few grammar and punctuation issues, solid prose, all-around excellent work.
kohakuNshiro
Title: Otakuite | Posted 08/11/08 | Reply
This story was told from TenTen's point of view and it was very inspiring. Seeing TenTen's curiousity in Sakura and Sasuke.
Then there is Neji who just has to come in and tell her what everyone wants to happened even though all that has happened between the two of them. They are actually hugging!!
I've read mostly all your stories and what else is there to say they are all very inspiring and imagitive!!!!!!!!!!
queenB1
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/12/08 | Reply
wow, like the others have, said, there aren't many Tenten stuff out there. And thanks to Someguy (lol nice name) for giving this person their inspiration back!! XoXo, hope to see you soon, QB1
KoInu kyan
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
This has to be one of the best and few stories about Tenten. She just never gets any love. Keep at it, please! I'll be watching!
tokyokisshu
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
Wow...awesome. You keep on writing Sasuke-Sakura, that's my favourite anime pairing neways.
I like the way your stories are set out so it's not really abovious what's happening till the end, which really draws you in, err, if you know what I mean.
Good job! ^^ Keep on using those awesome writing skills, kay? XD
myTragicENDING
Title: Otakuite | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
*stares*
Damn, you're a crazy fast typer. I am in awe. *bows*
It's an addiction. Sort if like chocolate. Sometimes when I think Kohaku-Dono's The Danger of Fanfictions, I feel like she was talking directly to me...
I think I might be going crazy...
.tess.
SomeGuy
Title: Team | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
@myTragicENDING:
Haha . . . hey, if SasuSaku's what you wanna do, don't let me stop ya.
Someone else tries to stop ya, well . . . you can worry about that when it comes. But you aren't gonna get it from me.
myTragicENDING
Title: Otakuite | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
Thank you so much! I love comments like yours, long and thought out. I really should broaden my horizens, but it seems everytime I think of a new plot for a different pairing, I say to myself, "Hey, this would work with SasuSaku.."
And as you can tell, I get a little carried away.
I'll take your thoughts into consideration, I think I have a new story in the works...
*cynical smile*
.tess.
SomeGuy
Title: Team | Posted 06/09/08 | Reply
I think first off I have to say that I'm very honoured to have this dedicated to me. Thank you for that!
So this newest story of yours . . .
It goes without saying that a lot of your stories are very similar, since they're all more or less written about the same themes and characters. That in itself doesn't bother me since no one would care if an artist drew a big set of SakuSasu artwork or anything, right? Actually, a lot of times the feeling I get is that your stories are all taken from one big main story, but just telling slightly different pieces of it or telling them from different perspectives.
All that said, it was really refreshing to have this one told from Tenten's point of view. It made the narration different in that it both gave the narrator an invested interest in the events taking place as well as allowing for a way to not have all the answers laid out in obvious sight.
Only main thing that would keep people from enjoying this would be if they don't have a large interest in Sakura-Sasuke romance story (or in this case, in Tenten watching a Sakura-Sasuke romance story). Other than that, you write some excellent stories. Very few grammar and punctuation issues, solid prose, all-around excellent work.