Hawksky the new worrior

ok ok as you know I like to write stories and You can ask to be in My story if you want I won't say no if you ask to be in the story heres the story:Bluestar called all the Clan to are rock she said"today we will honor Starclan's choice to Make Hawkpaw a worrior and her mentor Willowpelt to give the honors of giving Hawkpaw up to a worrior and Hawkpaw do you promise to always obey the worrior code and to protect your clan even at the cost of your life?"I said"yes Bluestar i do"Bluestar said"Hawkpaw I now hopnor you with your worrior Name Hawksky"I bowed respectfuly to Bluestar the Clan all said"Hawksky Hawksky Hawksky"My blue eyes shone with exitment to be a worrior My mom Frostfur bounded up to me and licked my ear and said"easy my daughter you still got more to learn and you haven't done your vigil yet my little Hawk"i said"Mom thanks for everything hows brother Scarpaw mom"Frostrur backed up alittle surpised at the sudden question she said"oh Scarpaw you'll see about your brother Scarpaw in are gathering tomarrow night my little Hawksky and call me Frostfur now Hawksky"I let out a Mrrrow of agreement Fireheart walked up to Frostfur and I he said"wow you've grow Hawk so Frostfur can me and Hawksky talk?"Frostfur meowed her approvel My black pelt shined in the sun I said"hi Fireheart ummmm what is it" I felt embarrassed to talk to a older worrior who was like a big big friend cause when i was little Fireheart saved me from drowning near the RiverClan's river and his sister Princess's kit Cloudkit was always talking about Fireheart.Fireheart said"welll ummm how far do you like being a worrior?"I said"wellll..........ummmmm its nice so far but i know it will be harder in the future and I'll have to listen to the senior worriors like Willowpelt and Whitestorm and many more and I'll maybe have to fight my brother.

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