- Created By ShadowWolfWarrior
You fans have failed meh! Okay, I'm really not that mad, but seriously? No one? Well almost no one. My darling Lia, managed to get a hold of me while on her trip and said she loved my new idea. I love her she much. Anyway, it's been decided, genetics over demons. (I hate waiting, so I only gave you people a week or two. Not fair I know. Deal with it.) The plot is not going to change much, I just need to edit the bios. Oh, except wrath, he changes, a lot. Anyway, polls closed.
Alright, so for all of you reading, and don't know or haven't met me on here, I'm notorious for making things more difficult than it needs to be. So it's nothing new when I say I'm having trouble with the plot of my story, I've been having trouble in trying to incorporate how demons came to society in the first place, to say they just appeared is a little too anti-climatic, to say there was a war and demons won the right to stay sounds like a mixture of WW3 and the rapture. So I thought I'd go with an alternative approach to what our temper-mental heros and heroines are. I was thinking, and stay with me because when I think it sometimes gets a little contrived (I'm not sure I'm using that word right, but you get the point hopefully) anyway, I was thinking government genetic experiments, it's not too out there we spliced a human with rabbit genes before, they didn't sprout ears and a tail but it was successful, that was back in 2000- something. I should really get my facts straight but UNcharacteristic to me I don't care right now. It's a little more modern and manageable and I already figured out how everything went (goes) down.
Here's the twist I'm letting you fans decide, for I can't trust myself, hahaha, anyway, you people decide demons, or genetic? I should get some feed back I have 750+ views not a lot but still. Some feed back would be nice.
I wake up to the cold, it's early spring and my apartment is usually drafty so, this is usual usually well as the pitch blackness of my room, it is usual for me to wake up well before dawn. I reach to the left and feel for the lamp on my nightstand, Only to grasp air. I start to sit up, but I am unable to for there is nothing cushioning my body. My bed is not there and neither is a floor or any kind of solid object.
I'm wide awake now, I go to sit up but I flip in the twisting winds, until I land in what feels like an upright position. I take a breath to settle myself, my father`s words ring in my head.
" Panicking never helps, panic kills," I look around, there is absolutely no light so my eyes can't adjust. I close my eyes and listen, only an eternity of whipping winds, as if I were in the eye of a storm. There is an unearthly wet, cold, the kind of cold that will go bone deep. It's almost as if it goes right through you.
I sit in the cold, waiting, just waiting, for anything. Until a soft blue light penetrates the black. I do my best to turn to face it's direction. There`s a woman, more of a girl, probably my age. In a flowing white gown, she's almost spectral and translucent. Pale blue light emits from her. Like a beacon in the dark, I stare at her, watching, waiting, I finally move towards her and she moves away and disappears.
It's black again, and for what feels like hours I sit, until another, more malevolent light penetrates the dark. It's orange and feels like fire against my skin. It rips the void in half, the scent of brimstone and the sound of cackling flames ingulfs the void. I'm plunged into hell, screams of the damned echo around me. The smell of brimstone is suffocating, and the heat could melt the flesh from your bones. I feel burning sensations on my wrists and ankles I scream in agony as white hot shackles burn and fuse into my skin. The pain is unbearable and everything fades to black.
Name: Jackie Marie Tanner
Species: Wolf Demon
Physique: Fit, hourglass figure
Hair clr: Brown
Eye clr: Blue
Identifying Characteristics: Dog ears and tail
Next of kin: Janis Tanner (Mother) and Baxter Tanner (Father)
Hobbies: Shooting, video games, kick-boxing, reading, motor cycle riding
Pros: Generally calm, sweet, first class in kick boxing, rich family, 6th sense, generates a hormone that masks other demons 6 th sense, acrobatics and gymnastics background, master of disguise
Cons: Occasionally losses temper, shoot first ask questions later personality, some what depends on family wealth, doesn't let many come too close
Description: My family is pretty wealthy we pay the government off every month so they leave us alone, I hide who I really am but I generally try to get along with others. I learned to distract the other demons with a special hormone so they can't tell who or what I am. Making me and my family safer. I pack two desert eagles regularly and if all else fails I have my gymnastics and kick boxing. I want a boyfriend and move out, but I don't really own my guns and if I let anyone know who I am they might snitch. So I'll just chill with my family and friends. For now.
As promised, my REDO.
Name: Blood Kane
Species: Wolf Demon
Hair clr: Black
Eye clr: Amber
Identifying Characteristics: Black Tribal Tattoo on right bicep, black dog ears, black leg length tail
Next of kin: Blizzard Kane
Wanted level: #3 on the F.B.I.`s most wanted list
Infractions: Resisting arrest, Grand Theft Auto, several counts of murder of government officials, attempt to smuggling fugitives, damage to property, laundering money, Illegal possession of a fire-arm
Last known location: Black Pass, Colorado, U.S.A. -- 3 years ago
Pros: Proper maintenance and care for fire arms, par-core, strength, advanced sensory under all 5, sixth sense: extra sensory, characteristics of a human, advanced accuracy, martial arts training
Cons: Quick-Tempered, Makes frequent rash decisions, makes things personal, slight paranoia, `switchblade for a tongue` for all my fellow 5 Finger Death Punch fans or more simply, a smart-ass, hatred for authority.
Description: Well, both my parents died when I was 13, My adopted brother, Blizzard then joined the air force when I was only a sophomore, my girlfriend died, as did my best friend, the government that promotes freedom and a lack of prejudice is out to expel all demons from this nation, unless working for them, I`m living alone in a hotel, rent is free because I'm an employee. Before dad died he was a soldier and all I learned about fighting and shooting was either from him, or from my bad tempered mother. Tonight now I'm in hiding refusing to leave America let a lonely home town. I live under an assumed name, James Coone, and right now I'm struggling to get by. So, my life kinda sucks, and by kinda sucks, it ----in` blows, pardon my grammar. But at the current time, there's nothing I can do about it, which I hate, I fell powerless, and I want to change that, but so far, until I figure something out, I'm hiding like a rat. If only I had more help I could topple their empire with, i don't know, a revolution? Hey, it's been done before. Everyone hates the government right now, but they're all afraid too. Humans want to help, but if they even try, incarceration. So, wish me luck. Until then, I'll just mind my own business.