I have too many manga in my portfolio, and that's because I don't know how to delete anything! Just saying, since I'm redoing Alice again. What I said before about me not putting anything about Alice up, well, I'm gonna put stuff up about Alice! ^ ^;

After watching Pandora Hearts and noticing the epic-ness of it, I thought to myself ,"I need to get Alice that epic and make it more Alice in Wonderland-ish!" So yeah, I am going to make it more like Alice in Wonderland. To do that, I need to remove some unnecessary characters that I had no love for in the first place. So now there'll be five characters starting now:

Alice
Resora L. (he'd be like Cheshire cat)
Smith R. (obviously like the white rabbit)
Vincent (he'd actually be more like the Alice of the story and Hero, but not main character)
NOT NAMED

The NOT NAMED character is a character that I have every idea for what they'd look like and such and such, but I don't know what to name her. She'd be like the Queen of Hearts except much, much nicer. Here are name possibilities:

Annabel - Easy to love
Eleanor - Pity
Fiona - Fair, white, beautiful/Wine
Carine - Beloved
Caroline - Joy

I'll probably name her Caroline because that's a pretty name! Although...it reminds me of a reindeer...

Oh! The new plot, of course! I'm not going to make this sound good just tell you how it is:

Vincent is being haunted by visions of bloody deaths usually pertaining to decapitation (get it? Off with her head?). While at the same time, he begins seeing Alice everywhere, but nobody else seems to see her, as if she were a ghost only he could see. One day he finally is close enough to Alice to at least talk to her and she runs away, frustrated, he runs after her only to fall down a hole. He is then knocked unconscious.

He awakens to a beautiful melody and strange singing. He finds himself in a strange world of darkness. Drips of light bounce around the area and it is like he's in a space wonderland. He finds a table in the middle of nowhere. On top of the table is a note with a strange poem (or riddle). It says to read aloud so he does. Suddenly, a door appears, he opens it, and finds himself in another world, but the door disappears.

So he goes through the world according to the poem, but has completely forgotten about the poem until he happens upon Alice in a pile of roses. What he thinks is just a doll awakens to scold him for crumbling her poor roses.

And that's all I got so far. All of it was in a dream! ^ ^; I'm not sure what's gonna happen next...I have to thing about it....and wow....that wasn't much of a plot...O.O;

The new genre I'm going for is more of a mystery/horror/fantasy/romance with possible action...but I haven't thought that part through yet. I want to make it complex so there will be a lot of riddles, relations to Alice, and nursery rhymes involved. I'm still not sure if I'll allow Vincent to go back to the real world or not....hmmm...Made jump from dimension to dimension? I dunno...

Tell me how you like it so far! Also! Check out this song that has a melody oddly sounding exactly like I would want Alice's theme to sound...'cept the lyrics say something about a mermaid yadda yadda:

Life: 06/15/09 | Posted By: Wakusei Aoshi | 0 comments