The character and colours are all cute, and I like the arrangement as well (no rough edges etc.). The font is also very nice. In most every category, this is a top-tier wallpaper.
However, I do have one issue with it: as others have suggested, the title is grammatically incorrect. (I apologise; I'm a bit picky about language.) Here is a handy reference for everyone, which should settle all these questions.
:O Ay, I was really sure it was 'thou' but now you got me thinking...was it 'thy' that means 'I' then? X_X sorry about that. No no you're not being fussy XD you pointed out something wrong that I might have done so thanks! =]
Ah thanks ^__^. Yeah I didn't know it was from moldavite, carnelian's work looks all alike so it's kinda hard to differ ^^; I'll edit the tags. Thanks Naomi-chan too! yeah I know the scan wasn't of high quality, it was 800x600 so that's why it looks a bit pixileated.
Nice one Lys.
I like the colors of this wallpaper, they really make it look like an old portrait.
Just a minor crit: I think the scan you used is not very high quality...I mean it looks rather pixellated.
On the other hand, the text looks wonderful! I would remove the drop shadow, though.
Anyway, it's an excellent wallpaper! ^^
Oh yeah, this is from Moldavite not Touka Gettan, as Sweetdevil said. They're both from Carnelian so it's easy to get confused :3
I like this very much, lots of prettyness. Very nice touches, and i like the caption, but 'thou' means 'you' or 'your' i think... Perhaps if you changed it to 'in thou heart i'll always be' ... I'm sorry for being fussy...
Wow, I haven't seen a collage wallpaper that's actually worth LOOKING at in a long time. It's well done, I adore the fact that you used soft, bright colors; as a matter of fact, the strong point of this wallpaper is that the bright colors are somehow in contradiction with the girl's mood, she seems nostalgic. Really good job, keep it up! :)
And Carnelian's artwork is a winner, you chose a very nice pic to illustrate (I was going through my Carnelian folders and found this one yesterday!) By the way, she's not from Touka Gettan, she's from the game Moldavite (I think her name is Annette).
Wow, what a beautiful wallpaper! I love how light the glow is, it makes it looks almost heavenly! =3 The photos are my favorite part of this, like faded memories. Fantastic job Lys! Its always great to see a wallpaper from you^^ Keep it up!
Oh wow!! Simple? This doesn't look that simple. *__* It's truly lovely! It's actually quite complex with all the scans you chose to use. I love how they look like old photos. She appears to be remembering them...it's very sweet. I like the texture, glows, composition, and the text, too! Yes, kind of Old English-type. :3 Very nice, Lys. ^^ I loves it!
Tally Solleni
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/22/08 | Reply
The character and colours are all cute, and I like the arrangement as well (no rough edges etc.). The font is also very nice. In most every category, this is a top-tier wallpaper.
However, I do have one issue with it: as others have suggested, the title is grammatically incorrect. (I apologise; I'm a bit picky about language.) Here is a handy reference for everyone, which should settle all these questions.
LystikinenaXP
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply
@chibi-anna-chan:
:O Ay, I was really sure it was 'thou' but now you got me thinking...was it 'thy' that means 'I' then? X_X sorry about that. No no you're not being fussy XD you pointed out something wrong that I might have done so thanks! =]
~Lys
LystikinenaXP
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply
@sweetdevil:
Ah thanks ^__^. Yeah I didn't know it was from moldavite, carnelian's work looks all alike so it's kinda hard to differ ^^; I'll edit the tags. Thanks Naomi-chan too! yeah I know the scan wasn't of high quality, it was 800x600 so that's why it looks a bit pixileated.
Thanks all!
~Lys
Naomi-chan2612
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply
Nice one Lys.
I like the colors of this wallpaper, they really make it look like an old portrait.
Just a minor crit: I think the scan you used is not very high quality...I mean it looks rather pixellated.
On the other hand, the text looks wonderful! I would remove the drop shadow, though.
Anyway, it's an excellent wallpaper! ^^
Oh yeah, this is from Moldavite not Touka Gettan, as Sweetdevil said. They're both from Carnelian so it's easy to get confused :3
chibi-anna-chan
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
I like this very much, lots of prettyness. Very nice touches, and i like the caption, but 'thou' means 'you' or 'your' i think... Perhaps if you changed it to 'in thou heart i'll always be' ... I'm sorry for being fussy...
But overall a very nice wallpaper *hugs*
Redblaze
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Looks great as usual! ^^
sweetdevil
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Wow, I haven't seen a collage wallpaper that's actually worth LOOKING at in a long time. It's well done, I adore the fact that you used soft, bright colors; as a matter of fact, the strong point of this wallpaper is that the bright colors are somehow in contradiction with the girl's mood, she seems nostalgic. Really good job, keep it up! :)
And Carnelian's artwork is a winner, you chose a very nice pic to illustrate (I was going through my Carnelian folders and found this one yesterday!)
By the way, she's not from Touka Gettan, she's from the game Moldavite (I think her name is Annette).
Sakuracherry
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Kawaii!!
It is so beautiful and pretty!!! Very good job!
innocent heart
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Wow, what a beautiful wallpaper! I love how light the glow is, it makes it looks almost heavenly! =3 The photos are my favorite part of this, like faded memories. Fantastic job Lys! Its always great to see a wallpaper from you^^ Keep it up!
Angel Zakuro
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Oh wow!! Simple? This doesn't look that simple. *__* It's truly lovely! It's actually quite complex with all the scans you chose to use. I love how they look like old photos. She appears to be remembering them...it's very sweet. I like the texture, glows, composition, and the text, too! Yes, kind of Old English-type. :3 Very nice, Lys. ^^ I loves it!
KawaiiPinkPanda
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
That's very beautiful!!! ^-^