This is one of the few fanwords that I've read XD it's great. Sad reality of this poor girl. Love the use of the metaphors and symbolism. There were few mistakes and the syntax had "flow". Poor girl. I think the tree for her was chosen well ^^
I like how Willow thinks, its very close to how many chilren in her situation think.
I thnk I'd like to see more of your writing :)
I'm going to check out your worlds and such ^^
It is very good, very nice. Powerful. Though I do not grasp the entire situation that the two foster parents were talking of, I think that makes it better. Mystery, a touch of....secrets. I like it. :)
FANTASTIC!!! So poignant. It has quiet strength, like a tree! Deft use of metaphor. It reads very smoothly. Structure and content fit together perfectly. You beautifully capture the heart of the girl, and the heartbreak of her situation. I loved this!
OMG! i love it! love it! love it! this is great writing. and great creativity and imagination. u made like, one or two spelling mistakes in it, but its alright. i LOVE it! i even hugged and faved. it was awesome. great insight on the character's thoughts and great title. great wording and structure. it was AWESOME!!! i cant believe i am the first one to comment on this great story!
WishUponYourStar
Title: Otakuite | Posted 11/28/09 | Reply
Aw, it's really sad.
It was really really great!
corn
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/05/09 | Reply
This is one of the few fanwords that I've read XD it's great. Sad reality of this poor girl. Love the use of the metaphors and symbolism. There were few mistakes and the syntax had "flow". Poor girl. I think the tree for her was chosen well ^^
LazieNinjaFrog
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 03/10/09 | Reply
WOW! XD ur a great writter.* faves and hugs* XD This is the first Fan words I've ever read. ^_^ Now I think I like fanwords. XD
good job!X3
~Frog-Out~
Madison2294
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 03/03/09 | Reply
I like how Willow thinks, its very close to how many chilren in her situation think.
I thnk I'd like to see more of your writing :)
I'm going to check out your worlds and such ^^
GanonSoul
Title: Otakuite | Posted 02/26/09 | Reply
It is very good, very nice. Powerful. Though I do not grasp the entire situation that the two foster parents were talking of, I think that makes it better. Mystery, a touch of....secrets. I like it. :)
Koishi Magna
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 02/26/09 | Reply
FANTASTIC!!! So poignant. It has quiet strength, like a tree! Deft use of metaphor. It reads very smoothly. Structure and content fit together perfectly. You beautifully capture the heart of the girl, and the heartbreak of her situation. I loved this!
twilight tiger
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 02/25/09 | Reply
OMG! i love it! love it! love it! this is great writing. and great creativity and imagination. u made like, one or two spelling mistakes in it, but its alright. i LOVE it! i even hugged and faved. it was awesome. great insight on the character's thoughts and great title. great wording and structure. it was AWESOME!!! i cant believe i am the first one to comment on this great story!