You know, I absolutely love stories that, while you read them, they transport you to this imaginary world where you can visualize what is going on. You definitely achived that.
Your description of the room and both characters was unbelievable. You made us connect to Sabine and made us see what kind of relationship she has with Dr. Strevenson right away.
Its a shame this all that we will have, though. Still, definitely an incredible fanfiction. Loved it!
Last edited by ShadowLight at 11:40:09 AM EDT on March 11, 2009.
First to view, first to hug, first to favor, first to comment! Cool!
This was really good. Is there any more? Before this? After this? I hope so. I've just met Sabine and I want to know more about her life. I'll have to check out your page. The description of the room was terrific! Great job!
ShadowLight
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 03/11/09 | Reply
You know, I absolutely love stories that, while you read them, they transport you to this imaginary world where you can visualize what is going on. You definitely achived that.
Your description of the room and both characters was unbelievable. You made us connect to Sabine and made us see what kind of relationship she has with Dr. Strevenson right away.
Its a shame this all that we will have, though. Still, definitely an incredible fanfiction. Loved it!
Last edited by ShadowLight at 11:40:09 AM EDT on March 11, 2009.
oiba
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 02/23/09 | Reply
this was a great story. i wish there was more to it. i'm soooooooo curious as to what happens next. it was really great. i LOVED it VERY mush.
James
Title: Team | Posted 02/22/09 | Reply
Hi Koishi. Thanks so much for the warm comments - I'm actually kind of surprised because I'm not much of a fan fiction writer.
This was a short story for The Reanimatrix on OB, so I'm afraid this is all I have of this character.
I'm very honored that you are interested in the piece though.
Koishi Magna
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 02/22/09 | Reply
First to view, first to hug, first to favor, first to comment! Cool!
This was really good. Is there any more? Before this? After this? I hope so. I've just met Sabine and I want to know more about her life. I'll have to check out your page. The description of the room was terrific! Great job!