You got em all except one then! 8D
(ty wasn't in it) << but i can see where you got that now oxo
Oh, and, don't worry about it - i'm just happy someone read this ^^"
And... i'm gunna have to look up a few of the words you just used x3
But thankyou! 8D And... i'll have a go i guess x3
>> I can't guess, 'cause I know I'll get it wrong. P:
I really loved the description and the amazing amount of imagery you put in that. I felt almost dizzy like your narrator did!
You should definitely enter it! It doesn't have to be horrifying to enter. Your story was haunting in it's own way, even if it didn't have monsters (well, the mom counts, no?) and goblins with pumpkins or somethin'. You should definitely try! :D
Lets see... it is written from Zousky's(sp?) perspective. Obviously there are his younger brother and his sister(I can't remember their names). Then there's Tom (I think) and I'd guess one of the voices was Ty.
Anyway, I liked this piece. You did an excellent job of capturing the narrator's emotions. (sorry but I'm too tired to go anymore in depth than that, damn PLAN test).
I would encourage you to submit it to the Halloween contest. Like I said before, the catharsis is great, and because of that I think this is (for lack of a better word) "scarier" than a lot of traditional Halloween style horror stories. And besides, the worst that could happen is you don't win, so why not?
Verbicyde
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
OMGEEEEE~ <333 This is awesome, Cloz~ <33 I second Raegon with the posting it in that Halloween contest thing.
That was so angsty and yummy~ You so goood~ <3 LOVE IT!
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
@mewmewpudding:
Yeah, his mumma's evil oxo
Teehee~ and thankyou~ x3
I'ma have a go nao~ ^w^
(think i'll just edit this post to submit xD")
*lazy*
^w^ <33
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
@Rageon:
You got em all except one then! 8D
(ty wasn't in it) << but i can see where you got that now oxo
Oh, and, don't worry about it - i'm just happy someone read this ^^"
And... i'm gunna have to look up a few of the words you just used x3
But thankyou! 8D And... i'll have a go i guess x3
Clozimodo
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 10/23/08 | Reply
@Delizoid:
XD! <333
Oh god deli! <333
*pounces*
Silly boy~ x3
Delizoid
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
..........*gasp* 8D
I have no clue what's going on here, but there are lots of pretty words, so. 8D
mewmewpudding
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
>> I can't guess, 'cause I know I'll get it wrong. P:
I really loved the description and the amazing amount of imagery you put in that. I felt almost dizzy like your narrator did!
You should definitely enter it! It doesn't have to be horrifying to enter. Your story was haunting in it's own way, even if it didn't have monsters (well, the mom counts, no?) and goblins with pumpkins or somethin'. You should definitely try! :D
Rageon
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 10/22/08 | Reply
Lets see... it is written from Zousky's(sp?) perspective. Obviously there are his younger brother and his sister(I can't remember their names). Then there's Tom (I think) and I'd guess one of the voices was Ty.
Anyway, I liked this piece. You did an excellent job of capturing the narrator's emotions. (sorry but I'm too tired to go anymore in depth than that, damn PLAN test).
I would encourage you to submit it to the Halloween contest. Like I said before, the catharsis is great, and because of that I think this is (for lack of a better word) "scarier" than a lot of traditional Halloween style horror stories. And besides, the worst that could happen is you don't win, so why not?