@midnightblackfox:

WELL, JUST THINK FOR A MINUTE. IF SHE USES THE NINJA TOOL SUMMONING, SHE THROWS DOWN WEAPONS AND PICKS THEM UP AGAIN. TO ME IT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE, BUT I'M NOT TRYING TO OFFEND YOU OR YOUR OPINION. I'M JUST STATING WHAT I THINK, SO PLEASE DON'T THINK I'M TRYING TO BE MEAN.

@shizuka101:

Well Tenten's my favorite character, so I dont think she's stupid.

@midnightblackfox:

i know but tenten is kinda stupid. plus my friend's a neji fangirl XD.

@shizuka101:

There's no need to bash the couple.

I was so sad at the begining, but at the end i was so happy tthat i cheered,and my class looked at me like i was crazy!!! it is written very well and it makes you feel like a member of the team.

NICE WRITING, BUT TENTEN AND NEJI, THAT'S JUST SICK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very well written, your writing style really pulled me it.

It was so cute and beautifully done. :D

Thank you very much!

awwwwww...... how romantic! I like your story and I think it's well written - good job!