Nice! I like how it started out and stayed kind of serious, even thought the main thoughts were about the sea-salt ice cream. I think you captured Roxas perfectly.
Nice Story! It's Gonna Continue right? You should put Axel in it! Hey do you want to start an RP fan fic? I write stories as well and you seem really good at it!
-Saruna
Nanao44
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/15/08 | Reply
awesome!!!sequel plox!!!???
otakualchemist
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 03/09/08 | Reply
@Saruna Kuromai:
This story is only a one-shot for now. But if I get enough people to ask, I'll throw in a sequel. Thanks for reading!
mAcaBrEpRinCeZz
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
that was really good! i loved it!
demondog ninja
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
cool, there are fanfics on theotaku now?! i wanna write one!
Mercury Dragon
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/06/08 | Reply
You're a good writer. I like this story! Good job.
*hugs*
Coopy
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/05/08 | Reply
Nice! I like how it started out and stayed kind of serious, even thought the main thoughts were about the sea-salt ice cream. I think you captured Roxas perfectly.
Saruna Kuromai
Title: Otakuite | Posted 03/05/08 | Reply
Nice Story! It's Gonna Continue right? You should put Axel in it! Hey do you want to start an RP fan fic? I write stories as well and you seem really good at it!
-Saruna