Wow! I just love it! That was very good SojiRem! You stuck that the characters personalities very well. I like the way you wrote it too. Are you going to make any more soon? I'd love to read them if you do! And again it was awesome!
Hey, sweet! This looks pretty good, so I'm saving it for later reading! (My computer doesn't have the internet - I'm always forced to use public computers :/)
Wow! That was one of the best fiction stories I've read. You did a nice job on the writing. Did you put it for publication? If you did and it pends through, Im faving it. Nice job on the story again. Laterz~
inuyashadorky
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 12/05/08 | Reply
interesting story line, I like it. I haven't gotten to Mello yet, so I don't know what he's like...
Kyubi Elric
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 10/28/08 | Reply
XXXchad
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 09/17/08 | Reply
@SojiRem:
oh didnt hear bout tht but i know now
Last edited by XXXchad at 8:51:06 PM EDT on September 16, 2008.
SojiRem
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 09/17/08 | Reply
@XXXchad:
You have to blame SomeGuy-sama for that. He's the one that published it and changed it.
XXXchad
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 09/17/08 | Reply
dang!! u practice writing fan fics or something this is really good oh one more thing mellos name is spelled mello not mellow
zerofc187
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 08/29/08 | Reply
A very nice story!
Great job!
XxKiraxCookiexX
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 08/24/08 | Reply
that was really good!! Keep up the good work!
Madison2294
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 08/21/08 | Reply
*clap clap clap*
bravo, an excellent read
keep it up!
DeidaraNarutoClan
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 07/02/08 | Reply
I see you were able to publish it. Glad you were able to. Can't wait until your next writing! ~Laterz
~Deidara
darkittylove
Title: Otakuite++ | Posted 07/02/08 | Reply
Wow! I just love it!
That was very good SojiRem!
You stuck that the characters personalities very well. I like the way you wrote it too. Are you going to make any more soon? I'd love to read them if you do! And again it was awesome!
Shelke~
Kyrianne
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 06/30/08 | Reply
Hey, sweet! This looks pretty good, so I'm saving it for later reading! (My computer doesn't have the internet - I'm always forced to use public computers :/)
DeidaraNarutoClan
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 06/28/08 | Reply
Wow! That was one of the best fiction stories I've read. You did a nice job on the writing. Did you put it for publication? If you did and it pends through, Im faving it. Nice job on the story again. Laterz~