Otakuite+ | Posted 03/08/12 | Reply
Your drawing style is brilliant and this has a great plot in mind! Just remember how important shading is and the writing is a bit squint so you can just type that onto the computer. The lines are a bit thick too so use thinner lines and maybe give the whole set a more realistic appearance to make it appear more serious. Backgrounds and the small details like the hands are also important in a comic like this to give it a serious and realistic tone. Other than those small things, this is brilliant! Keep up the good work!