Otakuite | Posted 05/03/14 | Reply
you should help me work on a story for my naruto story. it's named Naruto : Kuro memorī. its a bout a boy running from his hidden past as an Uchiha, would love to work with u.
Otakuite | Posted 09/20/13 | Reply
Very cool stuff. Btw would you mind checkin out my comic here?
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/24/13 | Reply
nice piece of art
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/13/12 | Reply
Otakuite+ | Posted 03/17/12 | Reply
cn't wait for the next installment
Chat Guardian (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/30/11 | Reply
@Ametsu the Ninja:
ahh interesting :3
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 12/30/11 | Reply
Thanks~ Though I plan to remake the cover soon. I plan for it to be colored in watercolorz
wow i like the cover wonder how the comic will be :3
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/06/10 | Reply
Yes, yes, I can understand that! XD
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
I will be sure to read that post again.
(When I'm not tired and I can comprehend things better. LOL- and probably type a better response....)
Ah, yes. Suspense.
Otaku Eternal | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
It looks good so far! But you would like some feedback...I'll do the best that I can do and to the best of my knowledge to help!
First of all, the layout of the pages are very important. The panels themselves tell the story. So where you place them and the different effects you use with them can effect the impact of the story. I think you've been doing pretty well with this so far, though. Just keep that in mind.
Second of all, cloth is very wrinkly a lot of the time and rarely is it actually flat and straight (personally, I dislike clothes that look like that...they don't look as lively) so don't be afraid to put in moar wrinkles! >:D But don't go overboard with them, 'cause then they're end up looking really freakeh...But just look at real life pictures for reference on these...or...look at yourself whenever you're dressing yourself or just sitting there.
And if you're not doing outlining...DO OUTLINING! And outlining as in y'know the thing with the circle and the plus sign to position the eyes. I've told this to everyone who's ever asked for feedback. I must tell you it WORKS. I've improved a TON just by doing that. And even if you feel like you can do it without the outline, some people can, but if you're looking for faster improvement and a better look overall, go with the outline (and you can do whatever you want on the outline, whatever you think gives you the best idea for what you're doing and for the right anatomical proportions).
Something I learned from Obata-sama~! Look at the angles that are used in movies...think about why they're used. You can get inspiration from the different angles of the camera. You can do the exact same thing with manga and it'd give you the same kind of effect. It's like music in the movie, it just adds to it. If everything was just seen from one spot it'd be very boring and it'd probably be very confusing and you'd have a cramped feeling. Try different angles that you think will give more emphasis to a scene.
I think I've typed too much (maybe I should've pmed you with all of this...'orz).
ETERNITY (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/05/10 | Reply
Yay for update!
so the person's a guy!
I like your art style I hope to read more
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/16/10 | Reply
Ah! I've heard of that story. Never read it though....
I know the basic idea to that story however.
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/16/10 | Reply
I get the feeling that this is a version of this one story I read. I think it was called the Crain Bride? I'm not sure. Hmmm....
Otakuite | Posted 04/23/10 | Reply
i really like this keep at it; also really good at art
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/09/10 | Reply
At least you started yours, i keep on delaying and thinking i would screw it up. Can't wait to see more.
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/08/10 | Reply
The story so-far?
These characters are attending the battles of the end of the chuunin exams.
and these two in particular characters are visiting from another country.
If you've seen episode 59 of Naruto - it might answer some questions.
If you haven't guessed already, Crane shown previously is affiliated with the character Kiippon.
Which as the story goes on, you'll figure out how Naruto makes an impact with Kiippon.
I apologize for the confusion!
Anything else you'd like to know.
Pokemon Master (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/13/10 | Reply
Keep up the updates!
x3Great job and keep it up!
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/12/10 | Reply
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/09/10 | Reply
YOU DRAW NARUTO SOOOOO WELL!! O.O I never noticed until now! ^ ^;
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/09/10 | Reply
love it! lol
Patchwork Rabbit (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 01/04/10 | Reply
Hem it looks quite interesting so far ^^ Can't wait til your next up date
Otakuite++ | Posted 01/02/10 | Reply
The cover is well done and I like naruto too. Waiting for the update :)
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/02/10 | Reply
So will read it.
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/31/09 | Reply
YAY! You've finally decided to start/post it! ^ ^ YAAAY!! I can't wait to read it...and what's his name!? TT^TT Brain fart, man...your character...well...yeah...
I can't go on! I can't remember what I was going to say!! TT^TT