Wow. You know, I stopped reading fan-comics awhile ago, but I would totally continue to read yours. It's got a good start, it looks good, and no, it's not weird at all to be attracted to your own characters. So yeah.
NO ಠ_ಠ
IT IS NOT WEIRD BEING ATTRACTED TO YOUR OWN CHARACTERS... NOT AT ALL
IT'S JUST THE FIRST SIGNS OF BECOMING A FANGIRL xD LOL
BY THE WAY.. YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A REAL MANGA!! I WOULD TOTALLY BUY IT!! I FREAKING LOVE THE ART IN THIS AND IT HAS A GOOD STORY LINE EVEN THOUGH ITS A FAN COMIC!! <3<3
사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해
SARANGHAE! I LOVE YOU! KEEP GOING!!! > u <
that was awkward..
Last edited by yumei hearts u at 8:37:22 PM EDT on June 29, 2012.
Just finished reading what you have hear already and its very well done!! (I hope you don't mind the spam of two comments from me here >u<) I love the way you've been using tone and perspective in your work! Great story too!! I can't wait for new pages!!
*highfives for bakuman too*
And you really improved from your last version of this, I saw your comparison page and this time its stunning!!
Last edited by MangaKid at 4:05:23 PM EDT on June 29, 2012.
Hey FUNimation! I've seen your awesome art around but just getting to reading your manga here! First pages look awesome, I'll keep reading and let you know what I think as I go too!
Also thanks a million for posting the links to the tones and fonts on your first page!! I'm trying to do my own manga as well, so thats gonna help me^^
Keep it up!
I have to use photoshop for everything since my Manga Studio doesn't work on my Mac. It can be a bit frustrating because I don't have access to a lot of the tones and textures in MS. XD; I was looking for a specific and common crosshatching type thing for page 23 and I couldn't find it online. DX /sadface
I kind of hate you for leaving off right there, I got pretty engrossed in the story. xD
The pages are looking really good. Can't imagine the amount of time it took to do all of the outlining and toning. Can't wait to see more though, but don't feel rushed or anything xD.
Thank you! I use photoshop for everything :) Some of the zoomlines I've gotten off the internet and other times I do them manually(Hold shift why making a stroke and it will turn out perfectly straight :D)
For the screentones, I also got them off the internet since I can't use Manga Studio anymore. I've grown quite fond of black toning though. :D It makes things a lot more dramatic and bolder.
That was a big difference from the first time! I wish I knew how to use manga tones. Do you use a program? Your manga is so good! Can't wait for the next page.
Wow, there is a major improvement to how this works. I like how you have it instead she knows its coming to being left clueless until right before the act. It leaves a much more dramatic feeling to it.
allycat2090
Otakuite++ | Posted 07/30/12 | Reply
Wow. You know, I stopped reading fan-comics awhile ago, but I would totally continue to read yours. It's got a good start, it looks good, and no, it's not weird at all to be attracted to your own characters. So yeah.
yumei hearts u
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/29/12 | Reply
NO ಠ_ಠ
IT IS NOT WEIRD BEING ATTRACTED TO YOUR OWN CHARACTERS... NOT AT ALL
IT'S JUST THE FIRST SIGNS OF BECOMING A FANGIRL xD LOL
BY THE WAY.. YOU SHOULD MAKE THIS INTO A REAL MANGA!! I WOULD TOTALLY BUY IT!! I FREAKING LOVE THE ART IN THIS AND IT HAS A GOOD STORY LINE EVEN THOUGH ITS A FAN COMIC!! <3<3
사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해_사랑해 _사랑해
SARANGHAE! I LOVE YOU! KEEP GOING!!! > u <
that was awkward..
Last edited by yumei hearts u at 8:37:22 PM EDT on June 29, 2012.
MangaKid
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/29/12 | Reply
Just finished reading what you have hear already and its very well done!! (I hope you don't mind the spam of two comments from me here >u<) I love the way you've been using tone and perspective in your work! Great story too!! I can't wait for new pages!!
*highfives for bakuman too*
And you really improved from your last version of this, I saw your comparison page and this time its stunning!!
Last edited by MangaKid at 4:05:23 PM EDT on June 29, 2012.
MangaKid
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 06/29/12 | Reply
Hey FUNimation! I've seen your awesome art around but just getting to reading your manga here! First pages look awesome, I'll keep reading and let you know what I think as I go too!
Also thanks a million for posting the links to the tones and fonts on your first page!! I'm trying to do my own manga as well, so thats gonna help me^^
Keep it up!
angluvdeath
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/27/12 | Reply
@FUNimation:
oh, thanks.
FUNimation
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/27/12 | Reply
@angluvdeath:
These pages are all done in Photoshop CS5 :) The screentones, zoom lines, font, and other manga element were downloaded from online.
angluvdeath
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/27/12 | Reply
just wondering, what program do you use to make these pages?
harvestmoonluvr
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/26/12 | Reply
Eee I love how everyone's adding to their comics since summer started <3 Great new page. I love all the dynamic poses you draw
Pixestars
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/12/11 | Reply
Amazing material. I cant wait to see more.
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/06/11 | Reply
Ah, good good. I really love page 24 where she's falling out of the "ocean" instead of falling into one. XD The look on Rei's face. XD
SharinByaku8
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 09/06/11 | Reply
You can do this in photoshop! XD Amazing!
Star Crossed
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/05/11 | Reply
Looks very professional! :D
And the story look good so far, good luck ^^
now I'm gonna read more >D
FUNimation
Otaku Eternal | Posted 09/05/11 | Reply
@Artgrrl:
I have to use photoshop for everything since my Manga Studio doesn't work on my Mac. It can be a bit frustrating because I don't have access to a lot of the tones and textures in MS. XD; I was looking for a specific and common crosshatching type thing for page 23 and I couldn't find it online. DX /sadface
Artgrrl
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/05/11 | Reply
Looking good!
Do you use Manga Studio or another program?
moonlit dream
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/05/11 | Reply
Love the new pages! :D I can't wait for moooore. ;3;
Datatype
Otakuite | Posted 08/09/11 | Reply
curlyque64
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/06/11 | Reply
Fun-chan you're doing a really good job :'D
Spirt of water
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
I kind of hate you for leaving off right there, I got pretty engrossed in the story. xD
The pages are looking really good. Can't imagine the amount of time it took to do all of the outlining and toning. Can't wait to see more though, but don't feel rushed or anything xD.
byakuyarox1
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/05/11 | Reply
@FUNimation:
Yeah. Too many buttons and icons.
FUNimation
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
@byakuyarox1:
Yeah I never really figured out Manga studio either xD; It was really confusing really confusing for me.
byakuyarox1
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
@FUNimation:
Okay cool! I don't have photoshop. I wish I did though. I have the free trial of manga studio but I can never figure out how to work it.
FUNimation
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
@byakuyarox1:
Thank you! I use photoshop for everything :) Some of the zoomlines I've gotten off the internet and other times I do them manually(Hold shift why making a stroke and it will turn out perfectly straight :D)
For the screentones, I also got them off the internet since I can't use Manga Studio anymore. I've grown quite fond of black toning though. :D It makes things a lot more dramatic and bolder.
byakuyarox1
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
That was a big difference from the first time! I wish I knew how to use manga tones. Do you use a program? Your manga is so good! Can't wait for the next page.
smartanimegirl
Otaku Eternal | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
FFFFFF-OMG YAY MOAR~ 8D
You're getting much better with your manga tones~ :3
(On a side note: I'll keep this account only because some of you guys don't post back on DA as much. xD)
ladylita
Otakuite++ | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
wow
that clown thing is terifiying man! wicked story, but terrifiying clown!
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
Wow, there is a major improvement to how this works. I like how you have it instead she knows its coming to being left clueless until right before the act. It leaves a much more dramatic feeling to it.
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/04/11 | Reply
moar? please? lol
The guy with the bandages on his eye...on page 15 makes me think of a crazed KAITO. lol
lunesoldier20
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/02/11 | Reply
Oh, dramatic. This is a lot better than the original so far.
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 08/01/11 | Reply
asjhdgshfkshdfj MOAR...NOW...NOW! D: Please?
moonlit dream
Otaku Legend | Posted 08/01/11 | Reply
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This is so amazing. :,) I love the way you shades it. Very nice! I'm looking forward to more updates. :D
byakuyarox1
Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/01/11 | Reply
It looks so professional T.T :) I was captured on the page where you were explaining it reads right to left and I knew this was gonna be great!
TheAngelRaine
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/28/10 | Reply
I hope you continue this!^^ It's great so far.
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 01/09/10 | Reply
It looks very interesting, I look forward for more pages :D
MewChero
Neko Girl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 12/23/09 | Reply
Excellent so far. This version is amazing. It's a lot more dramtic. ^.^ I can't wait for more.
moonlit dream
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/23/09 | Reply
This is so.
Wicked.
Fly. (?)
Especially page 6.
mewmewpudding
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/22/09 | Reply
LMFAO
"How to read manga page"
Just like the real stuff. <3
smartanimegirl
Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/22/09 | Reply
A new version now?
Well, I must admit, the first page was pretty awesome. Loved how you left it colored, too.
The new version is coming along great. Can't wait to see how this one turns out. ^_^
red kie
Otaku Legend | Posted 12/22/09 | Reply
hm short and simple entry: looks good.
cant wait to see the rest
)Oo~ Black rabit ~oO(
10SecondsToGo
Otakuite++ | Posted 12/22/09 | Reply
wow
i like this version alot better
it sounds so epic!
keep up the good work
:D
i hope to see more updates soon!