....miwa looks really cool on page 18 panel 4 and page 19 panel 3....
i just thought i'd let you know...haha.....
who's odd? i wanna know *hint hint hint hint*
Oooh corruption in the political system...interesting...but is it the actual "king" OR is it like "king pin" like a mob boss or such?...wow twili...you seem to have a thing with feminine looking guys. XD ~points out a few things in wolf cub~ XP But anyway this is getting good...DO MORE O.O!!!
Last edited by TwilightHero at 11:56:18 PM EST on February 16, 2009.
Awesome.
I love how one of the people are all "Go back to bed" and the others all "You can sleep with us tonight" Nice contrast between them, you know?
Yes I agree with all that shadng and small frame stuff BUT It definatly seems interesting. He seemed to use some smort of steroid but overdid it...abusive child hood...I see some storyline aboutthe father blaming him for his mother's death! Ooooh soap opraish. XD Also not sure...did he pass out and someone put him back in bed or...was that him doing drugs in his tennage years and now he's an adult in the most recent frame? I'm just not 100% sure what's going on of course that happens when you only have just a few frames up. XP Keep it up this could be good. hah batman! The Dark...NINJA!!!! XD
Process of thoughts while reading:
1. OHMIGOSH SHADING! *love love*
2. lawl, child birth
3. tests O.O
thoughts translated:
I thoroughly enjoy what ever medium you're using to shade this thing. It's very interesting. The one complaint I have though is that the pages are too small. Also, you might wanna consider more panel variation unless you're going for American comic book style.
Second, starting off with a childbirth struck me as funny for an odd reason. But it was cool.
Three, I am curious to see what they are doing. :3
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Twliwolf! I love how you did thish. O.O I´ll fav. and hug. ok!
SLEEPING IN FTW.
haha.
i really like this....especially cus its totally relatable*wen waking up around noon* awesome.
i guess only down side of it is that the pages are so small D:
ill comment mre wen mroe pages come :D
and if possible, can u make them bigger?
Last edited by Lizinator03 at 2:32:08 PM EST on January 11, 2009.
Oh! Awesome cover :3
I like how he's sort of coming out of the shadows, and I like the how you can see the strokes of paint on the outer part of the circle.
Good Job Twili-chan ^^
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/21/09 | Reply
weee birthdays
Lizinator03
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 04/19/09 | Reply
....miwa looks really cool on page 18 panel 4 and page 19 panel 3....
i just thought i'd let you know...haha.....
who's odd? i wanna know *hint hint hint hint*
gaaragirl911
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 04/10/09 | Reply
This is really good so far! I can't wait to read what happens next!!
*your new reader*
Gaaragirl911.
Souper Spoonpink-pineapple
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 04/10/09 | Reply
whoa i really liked this
the coversations flown so naturally xD plus everythings kinda easy to read/follow along with (Y)
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TwilightHero
Title: Otakuite | Posted 02/16/09 | Reply
Oooh corruption in the political system...interesting...but is it the actual "king" OR is it like "king pin" like a mob boss or such?...wow twili...you seem to have a thing with feminine looking guys. XD ~points out a few things in wolf cub~ XP But anyway this is getting good...DO MORE O.O!!!
Last edited by TwilightHero at 11:56:18 PM EST on February 16, 2009.
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
Hiro's a man whore? wow that's just... wow. lol
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
his "girls"? what do you meanz???lol
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 02/03/09 | Reply
wow jacob seems concerned (sarcasm)
themakita
Title: Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/02/09 | Reply
haha, it's looking really cool so far :D
XdrownXmeX
Title: Otakuite+ | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
i loves all the shading! i demand more pages cause it's that interesting ;)
Iruka Sensei
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
This looks interesting, can't wait to see more!
Happy November! Better fun Turkeys!AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
"He wont just disappear like that.... will you?"
Nice, hope to see more ^_~
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
Awe, how sweet.
I love how he cares so much about Jacob :)
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
Awesome.
I love how one of the people are all "Go back to bed" and the others all "You can sleep with us tonight" Nice contrast between them, you know?
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
lol... Jacob.
ha ha ha TEAM EDWARD!
Nice job twili. Keep it up
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/30/09 | Reply
lol I love that!
"AAAAAAAAAAAH!... Thud"
TwilightHero
Title: Otakuite | Posted 01/29/09 | Reply
Yes I agree with all that shadng and small frame stuff BUT It definatly seems interesting. He seemed to use some smort of steroid but overdid it...abusive child hood...I see some storyline aboutthe father blaming him for his mother's death! Ooooh soap opraish. XD Also not sure...did he pass out and someone put him back in bed or...was that him doing drugs in his tennage years and now he's an adult in the most recent frame? I'm just not 100% sure what's going on of course that happens when you only have just a few frames up. XP Keep it up this could be good.
hah batman! The Dark...NINJA!!!! XD 
twiliwolf
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 01/13/09 | Reply
@AnimeAngel993:
I chose Hiro because it sounds like the english word Hero, but i think that in japanese its Kind, gentle or Horse..... lol
Last edited by twiliwolf at 8:26:12 PM EST on January 13, 2009.
twiliwolf
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 01/12/09 | Reply
@Sage of Magic:
the medium is basicly pencil sketches with water and ink shading
Sage of Magic
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Process of thoughts while reading:
1. OHMIGOSH SHADING! *love love*
2. lawl, child birth
3. tests O.O
thoughts translated:
I thoroughly enjoy what ever medium you're using to shade this thing. It's very interesting. The one complaint I have though is that the pages are too small. Also, you might wanna consider more panel variation unless you're going for American comic book style.
Second, starting off with a childbirth struck me as funny for an odd reason. But it was cool.
Three, I am curious to see what they are doing. :3
Samedi-Mai
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
HI
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AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
hmm what's going to be tested?
Is it like a cure for cancer (I Am Legend Stasis)
:P I look forward to more~
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
ha ha ha ha ha
"I'm going to the back"
That could so be dirty.
(sorry pervert here :P)
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
I agree that the pages are sort of small,
i love that name "Hiro"
does it mean something?
Lizinator03
Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
SLEEPING IN FTW.
haha.
i really like this....especially cus its totally
relatable*wen waking up around noon*awesome.i guess only down side of it is that the pages are so small D:
ill comment mre wen mroe pages come :D
and if possible, can u make them bigger?
Last edited by Lizinator03 at 2:32:08 PM EST on January 11, 2009.
twiliwolf
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
@AnimeAngel993:
Lawl thank you XD
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Awe! I like that character already!!!!
"you can't die... you can't"
Awesome way to start off a story.
I look forward to more :P
(See?? I kept true to my word)
AnimeAngel993
Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Oh! Awesome cover :3
I like how he's sort of coming out of the shadows, and I like the how you can see the strokes of paint on the outer part of the circle.
Good Job Twili-chan ^^