Ehehehe, I love the extra page. I feel sorry for him especially well in the top panel. XD

And the bottom part made me laugh a lot. We had a guy in my house at school who had a mustache that everyone was always trying to get him to shave. Shame they didn't give him a razor at school. *laughs* They probably would have gotten in trouble from bringing a 'weapon' into school, though. >>

SQUEEE!!!! it's brilliant!!!! there's something i like about the way you draw that i can't quite put my finger on....

Yesh!! The first page to the next chapter! I'm excited to read this chapter!

I like the coloring. I didn't know he had yellow eyes though, I guess I missed that the first time. T.T

I think I'm falling in love with your Xander!! >.< I love his facial expression on the first panel!! Seriously, what's a father to do? Great job!!

Ahaha, 'Where, in God's name, is my shirt?' XDDDD

I can't draw guys very well at all. They look like very manly women, or so feminine that it scares me. I think you draw guys very well!

Don't worry about the anatomy. I'm no good at guys either, and you're way better than me. Anyway, I like this page too, though I'm still anxious to see what the kids will do. Oi, don't push it though. Get some rest!!

It's ok about the lack of descriptions. This page is pretty much self-explanatory. I have a feeling the kids are either going to be A.) happy that Xander is ok, or B.) furious for not letting them know about the passing out thing. Probably B.

Aha!! I was right! He did use an illusion/halucination spell thingy! Poor Xander though, he got pretty drained!

YEH BABEY! YEHH! ITS BACK N ITS FFFFFAAAASSSSTTTT

Wait. What just happened? SO CONFUSED!!! I'm guessing Xander used some kind of illusion spell thingy on Vincent....but I'm not sure! Darn! I have to wait until the next page!! So impatient... -_-

HOLY CRAP! It's a zombie!! I love how you drew its hand. So awesome.

Jingle-san, I'm afraid I don't understand what's happening at the moment. Why are the fighting again?

~the smexykazekage

EEEEEWWWWWW!!! Zombie!!! Just seeing that dried up hand makes me want to take a bath! *shudders*

Well, you did a fabulous job on this page. I've never attempted to draw a zombie, and now I know why. It looks like a nightmare to do, but I think you pulled off quite nicely! Though I am curious as to what a zombie is doing in the fight... Gah! Now I have to wait until the next page!

This is such a great manga, JingleStansChibi-san.
Great story so far and the cover is so professional-looking!
Kudos!! xD

~the smexykazekage

@JingleStansChibi:

Lol! I don't blame you. You do a great job as it is, and I'm not complaining in the least! I enjoy reading the manga so far, so no worries about the coloring thing.

Yesh!! Xander rules!!

I think the magic conversion thing would stand out if the manga was colored (not that I'm asking it to be, I know it would be a bear to do). Anyway, keep it up! I look forward to more pages!!

I tried to see your updates from yesterday but they wouldn't show! I was so made at my internet!! It's a good thing that it decided to work with me today cuz I was ready to chuck my wireless adaptor out the window.

Anyway, I love your new pages!! The fighting scenes must have been a pain! I can see how they would be hard to do with all the angles and poses. You did a wonderful job though! Now I can't wait to see what Xander has up his sleeve!

@JingleStansChibi:

Waah, I can see it now! :D Muchas gracias.

Yeah, theO's been really strange lately. It makes me want to kick something really, really HARD. *evil smile*

Waah, my computer sucks... I can't see page 19! DX *dies*

ZOOM ZOOM ZOOOOOOM~. |D (Does this remind anyone of that car commercial?)

Look at that guy go!

I vander who vill vin? *lame accent*

WooT! Gawd, Ilove your art. It's so fresh and clean.
Anyhoo, the dimensions for the art are 2000x1500- I think you can view the requirements on the Submit page... I think. Lol.
~Yosei (TheDarkAngel)

Nyaaa!! Can't wait until the next page!! Sniff...it's almost like a cliff hanger! T.T So yeah, I look forward to reading more!! >.<

I am absolutely in love with your work!It's beautiful,it really is.I mean,it looks professional!And that minimal screen tone is really working out.I can't wait to see what will happen next!!!Please post more!!!
~Thyme Girl

U spelt staring wrong

i definitely love this manga~! xander is cute. :3
i'm looking forward to more updates, that's for sure. the minimal-screentone style looks great, too! i should try that with my manga and see how it looks, since screentones eat up so much time. D:

anyways, keep up the great manga! the storyline and the characters have me hooked!

Good job! I think the minimal screen tones and stuff is working. It looks easier to do and things don't look to crowded.

Yay!! Another page!! *glues eyes to screen*

Well, having the gray tones does add depth, but if it gets to be too much of a hastle, then don't worry about it. You could do the next page in strictly black and white and then see what everyone thinks, popular vote, ya know? Then again, you are the artist and it's your comic. Do what you want. I'll love it either way! ^.^

See ya around!

YIPEEEE!!!!!!! ITS FASSTTEEERRR NOOOWWW!!! :D (dang mi stomach hurts from screaming last nite!!!) Ps, seriously, i thought this page was rlly gud! U PLEASE ME IN EVERY WAYYY :D

Yay!! Another page! Ok, so Arwen is the cold, stand off-ish type and her brother, Edrick, is the outgoing, loves-to-make-friends type...right? They're personalities are total opposites but that's what makes them interesting! I look forward to see more! GREAT JOB!

Well, I dont know what to tell you about the cover thing. It happened to me to... but it went away. I like the comic! You have to tell me where you got the screen tones though. Please and thanks!

It's so ironic how he's raising those two, even though he's an exorcist. It makes me laugh. XD

As far as I know how to change the page, I think it's on the main page when you submit a manga. I think you'd probably have to go under edit in one part. Unfortunately, I know that I wasn't any help to you. I'm sorry! If I ever do figure it out, I'll get back to you.

This is a cool manga! I'm really interested in the story. I'm curious though, how does everyone know that the kids are demons? (Are they both girls?) You mentioned hair color earlier so I'm thinking that's the distinction. Anyway, I look forward to more pages! ^.^

@JingleStansChibi:

cool! I tried but its really hard.... you must have loads of practice!

Hey, how did you create this (like, what program did u use?)
Tell me, please I need to know, it is so good!!!!

That's hilarious that she doesn't even wait for him to leave before she starts to change. XD

It's okay if you're as slow as a box of nails. I can be slower. *laughs*

@JingleStansChibi:

OMIE GOSHIE! I HAB BEEN JUSS REPLIED FROM CHIBIEE!!! :D N IM THE FIRST! THIS IS LIKE BEING A FRIEND OF KITE KUBO OR MASASHI KISHIMOTO! (the creators of bleach n naruto!) :D

WHAAAHHH CANT U JUSS MAKE IT FASTER! I LUUUUUUB URE STORRY!! FASTER FASTER FAASSTEEEERRR :'(

nice love this.... keep up the good work...

I WANNA BE LIKE UUU!!! I WANT MI MANGA TO BE FAMOUS AND GUD LOOKING!!! (welll it isnt released yet )