The cover looks good, but you really shoiuldnt use a PHOTO for the pages. Annd...the second age is a bit random and doesnt really match the first.
And dont label objects like "a scary movie" cuz ppl can probly figure it out themselves. the art is decent though, keep working at it!
AHH!! very cute cover mewmewfaith! ^0^ Koii loves you and she can't wait to see what this manga is about!
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Sensei Ryuu
Title: Senior Otaku++ | Posted 08/22/08 | Reply
The cover looks good, but you really shoiuldnt use a PHOTO for the pages. Annd...the second age is a bit random and doesnt really match the first.
And dont label objects like "a scary movie" cuz ppl can probly figure it out themselves. the art is decent though, keep working at it!
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