OMG WOW. LOVING THE EYES. CANT WAIT FOR PAGES

Yay!!! Finally!!! My prayers have been answered!!! I LOVE Yume's eyes!!!
I also really like the name. It's kinda poetic, but in a true way if that makes sense...

wow yumi looks scary!whats eatin her? will we find out soon?

This chapter cover is intense!! Wonderful use of color and light.

YAY, first comment on the new chapter cover!

WOW! This sure is impressive, I love the title. And the way you used red in this one... Amazing! Now I can't wait for the chapter, LOL!

pleeeeeeeezzzz put more lolz i love this so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@Reenigrl:

LOL. What? No shiny new red convertible?

@MandaNoel07:

Thank you so much. glad you think so ^_^

@demon-plague:

yeah there wont be an update for a while ^^;

@CrispRain:

woah. 300! why I supose you do ^3^ *smooches* lol

Who Ho!! #300!! Do I get a prize? Oh yeah, This stories awesome!!! Please keep doing it!!

omg, I love this. So so much. Absolutely beautiful. Ive checked everyday for an update. Please hurry, the suspense is killing me

please do more, this is very exciting. I'll be waiting for more.

that awesome!!! let me know when you get new chapter in!

@Kitty K.O.:

yeah that would be awesome!

@Sole Storyteller:

lol never heared it but I alway find it funny when songs match up with things.

Heh, I just read the end of chapter 9, and it happened that I was listening Inuyasha OST - To the end of sorrow. It matched perfectly!

Update soon please! I want to see how Sesshomaru apologizes. He looks so upset at himself, and Yume's hurt, too.

@Yulinamon:

Thank you so much ^_^ that means a lot to me.

looks like he will eat big plate of crow tonight;)

Heh, what you say came biting you back in the butt...eh Sesshomaru?

I must say, that was one way of slyly telling Sesshomaru off there Yume. I do feel sorry for the girl, Sesshomaru needs to apologize! Pronto!

Update soon as always ReenGirl!

Out of all the fan comics i have read on here and seen i must say yours is the best and your amazing drawing skills as well

gah sesshy is being a jerk
she should leave already

Kyaaahhhh! The suspense!

@vampireBride:

hi! and thanx so much :D

sooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooooooool

more plz :)

I'm surperised Sesshy didn't smell that it wasen't her blood.O.o Maybe he was just too angery to realise it?XD

if you publish this id buy it. ^ ^

@Kitty K.O.:

Im sure she could have, but sessh was being stupid and took the last kill XD

Oh boy, does Sesshomaru look mad or what?
I hope the chapter title isn't foreshadowing something here...(Gulp!)

Update for us soon Reengirl!

@cuttieavila:

what girl?

@InuYashaReader:

lol yeah they are ROUS's lol. yeah I forget sometimes. it's hard to catch when it's just me doing it.

Like I said you don't have too. Just trying to help. But I did notice some grammar errors like Rin's name wasn't capitalized or something minor. I'm a minor beta for fan-fiction can't you tell?

Had to stop at the action scene? I saw your comments on Deviant, maybe the demons are R.O.U.S's! (Watched that movie sooooo long ago).

Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!

@InuYashaReader:

thanx so much ^_^ yeah I notice that too. though I had thought about doing that from the begining I decided not to due to the fact to me it looks like the person talking is CONSTANTLY YELLING. LIKE THEY'RE EXCITED ALL THE TIME. lol you see what I mean?

@i Heart Waffles:

well yeah it's called improvement lol

i noticed your drawing style is starting to differ from the beginning

Yipeeee! More Memories! A little Rin is being mischievous now! I hope Sesshomaru finds Naraku and kicks some spider butty! Kami, I sound like a kid sometimes!

Hey Reengirl, I love this manga, I just want to point something out that might help you as I have read all the dialogue in lettering. Most manga and normal comic's dialogue are all in capital letters. LIKE THIS, and are in a slanted type of font, the reason I believe is to read the dialogue easier, sometimes lower case letters tend to be a little distracting. About 98% of all the comics I have read do this formatting. You don't have to if there's a reason, only trying to give a friend some friendly advice!

Hope you update soon!

Yippee! More pages! Rin sure can run fast. Hury up and find her, Yume.

uwahhh O.O if you don't mind me asking...what program do you use to color? It's just amazing!~

love it more plz

@vampireBride:

thank you ^_^

@Tornado.dragon:

what!? why are you telling me this? dont tell me things I dont know >_< ... it never happend.

More Memories! More Memories! Okay, (stops being an annoying fan, and sits back down the wait patiently for chapter 9).

Does Yume And Sesshy kiss? Will Yume's (brother, I think), find her? I ask to many questions! Update for all of your fans soon Reengirl!

OMG!!!! keep going!! i'm hooked. you should have them have the kids you drew that would be so cute! ^^ and i hate how Sessy dies by Kana's hand in the actual inuyasha manga. But yay! he lives in this one. You should put a scene where Sessy has a memory of his father. it would make an awsome scene if you did. you know, show his past before he meets Yume or something. ^^. update soon please.

Oh man.... in one night I read all the sites from this manga.. and I'm waiting for the next pages. :D
First I didn't liked Yume... i dunno why.. but I think I began to like her. :D She has beautiful eyes and hair. *w*
And..... I love Sesshy in the story~~~
Good luck~~~~~~~

*sry for my English... I'm still learning*

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OMG! I TOTALLY JUST WANNA BASH THEIR HEADS TOGETHER IN A KISS ALREADY! lol i love it girlie keep up the good work. maybe someday the peoples who made inuyasha will pay you for your ideas and feature yume!... but i personally love your story line waaay better! love all your work!

@Kitty K.O.:

yeah cause after seeing her in the hotsprings why would he ant her to go XD jk jk... no, but youre right conflicts do happen and with sesshy you know there's bound to be one.

@Karmira:

really? lol well im glad I could get you to watch it. yeah everyone who makes a fic about sesshomaru has to tweak him a bit. but I try not to go to far with it. I like the way he is in the anime.

publish this and you make a fortune!!! its awesome!!! please dont never stop this here comic

Yea you updated! Rin's stomach growling was funny! Keep up the good work!

haha thats funny...thanks for the update and update again soon plz

I love how she reacts to discovering he is awake, it's so funny and they were so cute as children

omg!!!! ur soooo good!!!! i love ur illustration style! and you draw the action scenes so well!!! cant wait for more!!!

yay!! u updated it waas funny

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update im going out of my mind

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Pretty please update? ^^ I can't wait to see if Sesshomaru's arm works!

aaahhh im going crazy! come on Reenigrl you need to post more! listen to your inner you thats screaming at you to finish lol

love your style drawing, loving the story line, and loving the flirtatious atmosphere between Sesshy and Yume. Keep it up!

reenigrl im going mad plz update soon
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I finally watched some Inuyasha, so I can read this. I'm soo glad I did!! I read it all in one night! Your coloring style is as gorgeous as ever! The story is amazing! I love your portrayal of Sesshomaru and Jaken. Jaken makes me laugh every time. Sesshomaru's character is as complicated but the glimpses of the warmth underneath his calm demeanor are priceless!! Yume is a very interesting OC. I can't wait to read more!

update soon plz

No worries, even if InuYasha didn't show up, I would still read it! I love Yume and Rin's relationship! ;) And this scene with little Sesshoumaru and Yume is very cute! Hope you update soon! :)

Oh the new pages are nice.
Its cute to GOOD JOB

@Reenigrl:

This fan comic is soo good! -you're a great artist by the way-

@Kitty K.O.:

yeah someone else pointed that out too.. I must have been tierd to not have notieced... I fixed it as best I could though.

you miss spelled there on page 289

lol love page 295

Hahahaha love it...Not that you look girlly"."stop talking".
I think ists funny when you make yume say somthing that she didnt mean to then she starts blushhing...Sigh...Good work and i cant wait to see more!

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@InuYashaReader:

well you should stick areound cause Inuyasha does come in for a few chapters.... im not saying when though.

@Mad Hatter Belia:

thanx ^_^ uhhh.. no.. I just drew from what I could remember from my mind... and improvised lol

@Kitty K.O.:

I think your right... yume isnt always the attentive one lol. but I can tell you .... it wont happen in this chapter.

your doing just fine with this manga keep it up

@Kitty K.O.:

i think that you will be right ... i think hill remeber first!!!

oh thanks for putting alot more pages and its realy good again!! and please hurry with more becuz this is like the best ive ever seen

I must say this is the most well put comic of InuYasha I've seen! Keep up the good work! (Despite InuYasha being my favorite) I just love Yume, I think she's perfect for Sesshoumaru in every way! Again, don't stop, keep up the good work! ;)

aww how cute

Ohhh this is ganna get good (as always!)

At first sight, the first panel at page 285 sort of freaked me out...
"How is she clapping hands with one arm over her lap? How many does she have? Wait a minute... That's the dead guy's arm! Never mind..."
^__^'
(Well, I just woke up, that explains why my brain is working so SLOW right now)

@Reenigrl:

thats true it foes make it more interesting!!!! Hurry hurry hurry i want to read more....Uh oh i just freaked out.... i want more of memmories!

Good work by the way!

@thailafan:

thanx ^_^ lol... yeah sorry. I always do that. live you guys on a cliff hanger.. but that just makes it more interesting.

@Kitty K.O.:

lol Your exactly right... I just dont know why it's so hard for people to see that.

tanx for adding more !!!! I cant wait ta see what happens next . Will the arm work? I just have to wait !!! good work reenigrl....oh and why must u always stop at a part where u must know whats next (even thogh i always want to know whats next on this!)

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@Kitty K.O.:

yeah so now everyone can stop bothering me saying "what are you doing. sesshy dosent have an arm. thats not right blah blah blah." well TA-DA! he has one now... and it's not like he had an arm right off the bat from this story... he was armless up untill cptr 8 I have proof. lol

@NanashiUchiha:

uhhhh.... what? ive never heared of that happaning but no this is just a fancomic. pretty much a what if. If yume was in the Inuyasha world. and the only characters I claim are Yume and those not associated with the orignal inuyasha story. So of coarse I give all Credit of the Inuyasha Cast to Rumiko Takahashi. and I think the only way I would get in trouble is if I tried to sell it to a store or company or something withought the permission of the creator or viz entertainment. otherwise... and unless you didnt give copyright ownership to the original creator. I realy don't know how you could get in trouble.

ok not to sound like im hateing ur story its really interesting too heh but is this like a remake of inyuyasha or r u randomly using the characters? because i also did something like that and i got band from a website they dnt allow ppl taking characters and using them so i was wondering and also semi warning u ^.^ btw KEEP MAKING MORE ITS AWSOME!!!

@thailafan:

Bullseye! Nice guess, LOL.
I didn't see that coming...

@thailafan:

lol, well I just added some more. plus I was gone for a week. but i'll post more soon. but at least I was able to write more chapters.

I read this so many times you have got to add more very soon befor your fans freak....And i think you r doing a great job....Is she going to give lord sheshy that dudes arm?

she's not going to eat him is she ?

No Way!!! She's not gonna give Seshy his arm is she???! Craziness!

That awesome!!! even better! update it plz! i can't see wht happen next. XD keep it up! good job!

im new 2 this but that is so amazing u got skills im gonna start reading ur story cuz it looks awsome

Yay! Update! o/

YAY! Another chapter! Can't wait!

Your chapter 8 cover is so cute! I like her expression^_^
You 've come along way!!! Good job =D

OMG OMG KANNA KANNA!! FAV!! <3!!!!

@matsujun4me:

thanxs... though I guess I missed the comments on the body porportion thing... but yeah like ive said many a time. this was my first comic. my practice comic. so you can tell how it progresses as the chapters go on. Art and story wise. and your right as time goes on there is only room for more improvement I beleive the fully as well.

@TheAngelRaine:

realy? Im sure it's realy expensive though. well I sorta do that now in a way. my friend is nice enough to print out the pages for me then I put them in a binder... so it's like a book lol.

awww never mind: i caught up an hav 2 wait again this story is just too adictive

I really like ur story. i remember when i first started reading it. u were just starting it. i've been hooked ever since. i didn t get on for a while though and now im way behind o well that just means i don t have to wait for the new stuff to b put up!! keep up the good work. you have a unique style and you use it well u can only get better from here and i can t wait to see what else u do

Keep up the good work. I did laugh at the part Sessho pushed Yume! I can understand some comments about the way you draw the body proportions and about the predictability of the story. I agree in some ways, however... many mangaka have their own styles. I know in Sailor Moon manga, they draw the legs of the girls like they're about to break off. There's always room for improvement, and such comments help to realize where some of your errors are. But, Reenigirl, this is your story...so take it where you want to take it. Some will like it, some will not. And draw "your" way. Heck, this is good practice. I'm not completely immersed in your story, but it's your own. And it's not bad. I still have a long way to go to catch up to you. Though u arise the need in me to be better. I admit i envy u for ur fame. But I'll be keeping watch as a friendly competitor in the artist world. Vamos con fuerza!!

@Sole Storyteller:

lol thanx yeah I guess that does count if it is published on the web. im so slow. and thank you so much for your compliments. I hope that you do keep reading it... when ever i get the chance to update it XD

MOAR PLEASE :D

i havent been here in a long time and i regret it! i love this story!

I LOVE this fancomic i've read it about five times!!! i really wish you would finish it though... the suspence is killing me!! T.T -Neko Nii-chan

@Reenigrl:

Just writing a story already strikes you as being its "author". Also, I think publishing a story at a website is still publishing. So, no doubts there, at least for me!

Gods, I just finished reading the last chapter, and I must say I love your manga! Althought I didn't finished reading Inuyasha, I like it a lot, but your story turns Sesshomaru into a much more interesting character!
Yume is great, and she really makes me laugh, specially when she's surprised by Sesshomaru, LOL... One of my favorite scenes is the one where she acidentally calls him "Sesshy" out loud.
Also, I must add that I love your drawings (this coming from a guy who barely can draw stick figures and has crappy handwriting... so I don't know if that counts as a compliment). In fact, I like your version of Kagura better than the original.
Great job, and keep up the good work! I can't wait to see how this plot will go on...

i don't know how you do it! u have like 250+ pages and they are all photoshoped beautifully! i'm so jealous. lol when it comes to my manga i'm so slow. >_< keep up the great work!

@Kibaumi:

lmao, does it count to be an auther if you have nothing published? but anyways thanks yout too kind it's in progress right now.

@:

lol, yeah I don't like to be mean. havent you ever heared that expression. "treat others how you would like to be treated"

and thanx, one day I do hope to have a table at artists ally. that would be awwesome.

@Iruka Sensei:

*sigh* unless someone from the top by chance takes any interest in this.. I highly doubt it will be sold in stores lol

@:

eh, cool it was recomended, but I knew not everyone was going to like it when I started it lol, it started out as my own enjoyment..and some how caught on as this big thing... I dunno...

so yeah a few of my spoiler pics were made way before I even started this manga.. I didnt feel like deleteing them..so I added on lol.. so we know how it ends... it's how they get there is what seems to be keeping people reading. and I admit in the begining I had no idea what I was doing, truthfully I was just winging it... lol

but now I try to plan ahead and write down each chapter before I draw it out. so yeah I assume it will get less "fangirly as we go on" I hope you think so too... that is if you stick around long enough. and what mistakes I make in this manga i'll learn not to do in others to come.. it's all about learning from mistakes but also having fun too. besides.. do you realy think this is going to be sold in stores? I dont think so lol.

And the plot thickens...all fans hold their breath in anticipation for the next amazingfantastic release...

Great job!!!

@Kitty K.O.:

lol you do it because you love them lmao

@artamateur:

lol tahnx, well I owe you guys this mega update

Nooooooooooo!! it stopped!

plz make them kiss

I have a question and a comment. First off the question.
Is there ever going to be a part where its just the two of them and Yume suddenly freaks out since she senses her 'adopted family' nearby and tells Sesshy to go take Rin and Mr. Green-and-Grumpy and leave and pretend they never meet.
Just curiosity really, I don't know why I want/expect that to happen so much.

Now for the comment.
Do you think after you finish this chapter you could make a book 2? I'm asking because it is getting ridiculously hard to find certain scenes.

Anyhow this is an amazing story with amazing artwork. Thanks for sharing it with us.

@Kibaumi:

wow so this is your first time reading it? well thanx ^_^ though I highly doubt that I would ever be able to get this published... would they allow it?

@MooNLighTKisseS:

thanx ^_^ yeah I figured I owed it to you guys

WOOOOOOOOOOO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!

i lovee how she tripped onto him!! *squeeeeeeeee!* i've been checking like everyday to see if it updated so i flipped out when there were so many pages!! keep up the great work!! =DD

@pandabearluv:

lol thanx glad to know you like it

it might be great if the 2 kiss

@natnight18:

thanx.. it's takes a lot of practice... im still practicing lol

@Chobit Chi:

lol thanx so much ^_^

@Kitty K.O.:

no there are no upload limits for manga's just fanart I think.. glad you like the new pages ^_^ .. yeah ive been working my tail off lol

You are a very good artist....totally loved the graphics
You're really lucky to be able to have this talent!!! :) XD

Whoot! Mega update = amazing! This story gets better and better. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more.

HAHAHAHA SESHY'S A PERV SESHY'S A PERV!!!!!!!!!!!!

@cwg246:

Omg! I just joined the Otaku world but I have read your story "Memories" and I love it. Can't wait to read more. ^_^

gah! i was getting into it! i want more!
pleese reenigrl, make more!

I absolutely love it though
good art skills, and a wonderful story plot
overall fantastic
keep it up!

Why won't it show me page 219? *cries* I want to know what's on that page!

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I love this manga ^_^ lol you draw it better than the actual Inuyasha manga. I've been a fan of your art for a while. Lol Jaken acks like he's gay for Sesshy XD

@Reenigrl:

Haha neither did I but you prooved that there are by having your awesome art viewed by them and them showing their friends and their friends showing others and just a huge chain XD

I LOVE, yume's little cowlick ;3

@Air-Dragon:

LMAO a hut >_< lol

Awesome! It must just be me but more and more narku looks like a hut in his cape...

@tishamatacoz:

thanx :D.. yeah I honestly didnt know their were that many people on here lol

@vampgirllover:

lol maybe thats why it wont let me see all of them on my computer at home... it only lets me see the realy old ones.. I can see the newer comments on other computers though >_< wierd

Very nice reeni! lolz

@Reenigrl:

haha Idk maybe... but still you drew it really well :3. And congrats on the over 1000 favs!! :o

OH MY GODDD u had sooo many coments it took me forever to get down here!!! jk!! I loveeeee this pic its sooooo gooooddddd!!!!!!!!!!!!

@tishamatacoz:

I dunno... maybe thats cause we dont like to accept the reality that his arm was severed and then he became disfigured

@kiminosan01:

I know..I cant even believe I made it this far.. ^_^ yay me

I could have sworn I commented on this comic XD Very awesome!! :D Lawl I love how you drew sesshoumaru's arm. I never see anyone actually draw it. :3 Keep up the great work beautiful ~Amp

Sesshy was so cute as a little boy!

that lil girl has to be yume

THEY'RE SO CUTE TOGETHER!!!! Yume+Sesshy for life.

O.O I bet the girl's yume's mom >:]

I continue to be very, very impressed by this. You just draw so...well. Actually, "well" is an understatement >.

AHHH thats imberacing :covers eyes:

Nice Mulan reference. ^-^

i know that poor snake.. stupid sessy-kun why did he have to kill it// though if he didnt do something it might have hit him in the fase.. but that would have been funny, and he doesnt do 'funny'

I love when Yume and Rin are together! They are so cute! They're like sisters!

Everything is beautiful! Don't let anyone eles say otherwise! Truely magnificant! By the way I love the way you draw Kagura. She's so pretty!!Hard work truly pays off! :D

@Kitty K.O.:

lol you make me laugh.. very compasionate *wink wink* lol

oooooooo keep it up!!! ^^ i love all ur drawing, ur such an artist! i have fallen in love w/ this comic and i really cant w8 4 more!

Oh continue more!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

nice comic/artwork :D

Josh

yur writing more yay! thank-you! thank-you! thank-you!

ugh! I think im gonna have to resize some of the pages.. cause its all squished lookin..

c'mon pleeeaaaase write more candy wants to know what happens its so good!

OMG!!! i LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it! keep up the ausmum work!

super cooleos!!! plz keep writing!

what happened to the rest?!?!?!?!?! man, i wish i were this god, but im bad at this,and youre like the top of the awsomerest list

This is very, very good!
I vaguely remember reading the first few pages months and months ago when I had never even watched a single episode of Inuyasha, but I just read the whole lot right there. I love your drawing style, it's very pretty! I think you just need to watch your spelling and grammar and then this'll be perfect! >0

Oh...my...goodness!!!! I love this! You must continue or I'll die of not knowing what happens!!! I also am totally in love with your drawing skills T____T They make me jealous but I love them still ^_^ PLEASE CONTINUE!!

I love ur manga keep it up..I cant wait to read more..

Lovee It.
Keep going :D
....Please?^-^

I thought this peice was absolutly brilliant!
I came upon it one day while looking at Sesshomaru fan art.
Your story is brilliant.
It is very good.
I loved reading it.
You should seriously consider finishing it.
I would absolutly love to read more.
Very nice job!
I bow to you!
*Bow*
xD
♫Vampy-chan

you should comtinue to work on this wonderful anime cause even thought im not into sesshomaru and I think hes strange this anime is very good ^^

you make him look even more better than he looks on the show. That's hard to do!! Great story too!

OH MY GOD THAT IS AWSOME!!!and sesshy is hott.

I cant draw as good as you you have TRUE art do you do requests??

The cover is so very cute!

this is very good!! keep going. i'd buy this if it were in stores.

^-^ yay! Sesshomaru! sexiness. *grins*

This is a critic, NOT a trolling: I got very little critic, your style is 100% original so I won't touch that, but my critic is for your own good, in a professional way and is not based on my personal opinion on you. please NO DRAMA! The Overall body of Yume in the cover is too small or the head is too big. But judging from the drawing I'd say it's the body. It looks like Yume is extreme Anorexic. Her arm is so small it looks like she only has the skin on the bones. The Rigth hand (from viewer's vision) is also weird. The hand from the wrist to joints is too short. plus the Index is smaller than the other fingers as well as the thumb being too long compared to other fingers. The rest of the Body is overall disproportioned as it also look too skinny. I suggest you use the skeleton technique to watch your proportions, this helps a lot. Also, Sesshomaru's Shoulders are not large enough, it makes him look like he's skinny as well, too skinny, original sesshomaru should have strong and large Shoulders. For this, just refer to basic male anatomy. This was my small critic, the coloring has nothing wrong. keep it up.

i like this alot!! ur style is unique and pretty!! keep it up ~nyo!!! -^^-Yuffie

i love her hair, i want my hair like that!

shes so beautiful!!!! i love this manga, i hope that u continue this manga bevacuse i love it!!! kawaiii! ^//_//^

The cover is really awesome and so is the whole volume 1.

*stares at picture for hours* omg, it's awesome!

GAAAAHH!! I love your art! I really like the new cover although I think the first one was awesome too!

Omigod it's beeeeaaauuuutiful! SESSHY! *drool*

NOOOO... i actually like the first cover better!!! *sniff*... but tis one looks great too... but i liked the first one whaaa no fair D:

NICE!!! I'm totally looking more forward to this!!! Great artwork ^^ ..::love everlasting::..

you made a new cover! YAY! (LOVE IT!) *ED*

wow this is awsome did you acually do this if you did i would love to get lesson of drawing from you....

I like it so far. ^^ I really like your character too. Shes so unique..I like the bandage around her mouth. Its cool ^^

i love this! its awsome!!!

that is soooo cool i simply love your art work. and great job w/ the female charater yume.

this is awesome great job on the coloring

I'm so jealous of your art work. I couldn't dream of ever being that great! Love it! Keep it up! -nb*

yay, i'm first. weet. ^-^ great joob.