Great job for your first time! You had some great facial expressions and poses d=3=b
It might help if you added a little side note telling readers which way they should read the comic. Either the English left to right or the general Asian right to left. Adding some background and darkening some of your lighter lines might help as well. Though it could be the "scanner's fault" for some of the lighter lines.
All in all a good job on your comic. Keep up the good work! ^^
silvershriek
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/21/12 | Reply
@dark shryuuoken:
You're welcome. Hope it helped.
My scanner was being mean to me today so I feel your pain ><
dark shryuuoken
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 04/21/12 | Reply
@silvershriek:
thank the scanner did sorta screw me and i'll be sure to explain which way to read sorry for the confusion and thanks for the criticism
silvershriek
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/19/12 | Reply
Great job for your first time! You had some great facial expressions and poses d=3=b
It might help if you added a little side note telling readers which way they should read the comic. Either the English left to right or the general Asian right to left. Adding some background and darkening some of your lighter lines might help as well. Though it could be the "scanner's fault" for some of the lighter lines.
All in all a good job on your comic. Keep up the good work! ^^