So I picked 3 OC's from 3 people who are my friends here.

Alphonse13's Calix
Chibi-anna-chan's Vaek
Mangakid's Kaji

Since I'll be submitting 3 versions of this (WIP, WIP2, Final), I'll dedicate a phase of my work to each person. I think that works out well. This is the second phase of the work, the Line Art. Haha Line art is so hard for me: my hand shakes too much and I get nervous with PERMANENT ink... ;__;

If I have time, I'd like to do a "The Girls" version, but I don't know many female OC's out there. I think AllieElric has an OC I could do, but that's all I know. Can you guys help me out there? (I know that from Mangakid's OC help link.)

There are some mess ups on this, so hopefully when I lay some color on it, they won't look too bad. :P