well no one probably follows my style but im trying out new stuff how does it look

Character bio! (funny thing is ill probably never right a fanfic so this is almost useless but for people writing them feel free to use him)
Hight: 5 feet 11 and 5/6 inches (soo close)
weight: 159 pounds
Eyes: blue (duh)
Hair: light brown (also duh)
Age: 15
Weapon: Keyblade, Distant galaxy
Biography: Born to a world much like destiny island lived carefree till his world was too destroyed by the heartless. He was the only family member to survive. instead of being thrown somewhere else like sora he just floated in space in shock over what had happened. He is yes *sigh* on a revenge mission against the heartless. while in space he pleads for a way to destroy the darkness and is chosen as the keeper of the key distant galaxy.
Personality: Smart but not genius like always looking for a laugh to brighten his spirits. Usually random in both manner and placement like he will just show up at places. completely serious and focused in a fight. often he seems like two different people