umm the other one looked pretty icky and had bad shading i realized that it would look better if i went over it in pen....
so im sorry that the other one looked terrible but i hot this one looks just a tid bit better...who knows it might really look worse.....

well either way i worked my @$$ off going over this in pen just to make it look better
so i hope you like if you ont that okay too

ritsuka kun~