Mmmm, craptastic. Getting better at male anatomy, but still failing. I think his torso is too long. Same deal as the Sonja sketch, exploring a new style and still failing at it. In essence, these sketches are actually redesigns, but his clothes will probably be scrapped and Sonja's will probably be altered as well. He's the main character, and he has a non-emo excuse for his hairstyle, which gets cut in the story anyway. Don't flip, he's serious, not emo.