Anfaidora

Title: Senior Otaku | Posted 01/15/06 | Reply

Very good, love the colors. But I would like to add that Akira is a boys name. I thought it was a girls name at first to. Its also easy to get it mixed up with Akina, which is a girls name. Anyway love the picture, keep up the good work ^_~
Hazaa54

Title: Otakuite | Posted 10/13/05 | Reply

looks cool. its very brite (thats a good thing), but shes skinny, like shes anorexic or something. lol. sry i have no rite to be critical. i like it. thumbs up
ElvesAteMyRamen

Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 10/13/05 | Reply

The coloring is very nice and I like their sweet expressions. I would say that you should try to do more with poses and do something with the hands. Poses and hands are a wonderful way to bring out emotions and personalities of characters^_^ And it's ok you're still learning. That's what we're here for to give you tips and advice!
babydensity

Title: Otaku Legend | Posted 10/13/05 | Reply

Pretty cool ^_^ i like the coloring, you should work more in her body, but thats okay the practice make the master ~_^ i still learning too!!