You should work more on proportions. The hips look a bit too big. The head looks a bit small. Your shading and shadowing are well done. ^_^ You'll improve through practice. I have a lot of the same problems when drawing girls. If you want to see my artwork here's the link:
http://inuyasharobbie.deviantart.com/
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